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Evening Prayer

I heard the whispers of the Mantis, as I prayed, "My lord, please grant us a moment’s peace from cricket calls which echo always through these halls." Said the Mantis: Let's thank the maker for my head which swivels round your evening bed and for my vision, clear and bright to hunt those crickets in the night. I'll start at once, I'll catch them now if you’ll not fear me, this I vow: that what I find, I’ll grab and keep that you, kind sir, might get some sleep. With that I gave a sleepy nod, then turned my thoughts back to my god, but what a shock I had in store: I'm the cricket - the chirps, my snore. 8/19/16 For Contest: Praying Mantis Hosted by: Anthony Slausen

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Date: 9/18/2016 8:11:00 AM
LOL, Grahamburglar! What a great twist in the end! Congrats!
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Date: 9/17/2016 1:00:00 PM
Graham, I loved the humor in your clever entry. Back to congratulate you on your win! : ) 7
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:39:00 PM
Ah, yes....tis a good thing the mantis cannot devour the snorers....Great take on the theme.
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Date: 9/11/2016 5:28:00 PM
Such a cleverly original write, Graham :) Great luck with the contest, looks like a winner to me! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:58:00 PM
What a thoroughly FUN poem! Good luck on the contest. Agnes
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Date: 8/21/2016 7:37:00 AM
beautifully painted piece with great insight wishing you a blessed day
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Date: 8/21/2016 12:43:00 AM
A great take on the theme and a fine twist, Grahamburgler. I'm sure it will do well. Regards, Viv
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Date: 8/20/2016 6:39:00 PM
I was just thinking of the cricket myself while I was reading your poem. What about the crickets of the world? I'm one of them! Constantly nagging and praying..... Great job... and goodluck...
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Date: 8/20/2016 2:50:00 PM
Brilliantly ended! I enjoyed this. One of the best entries that is sure to get a top placement! : ) 7
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