Evening Prayer

I heard the whispers of the Mantis,
as I prayed, "My lord, please grant us
a moment’s peace from cricket calls
which echo always through these halls."

Said the Mantis: 
Let's thank the maker for my head
which swivels round your evening bed
and for my vision, clear and bright
to hunt those crickets in the night.

I'll start at once, I'll catch them now
if you’ll not fear me, this I vow:
that what I find, I’ll grab and keep
that you, kind sir, might get some sleep. 

With that I gave a sleepy nod,
then turned my thoughts back to my god,
but what a shock I had in store:
I'm the cricket - the chirps, my snore.

8/19/16
For Contest: Praying Mantis
Hosted by: Anthony Slausen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 8:11 AM
LOL, Grahamburglar! What a great twist in the end! Congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Graham, I loved the humor in your clever entry. Back to congratulate you on your win! : ) 7
Lawless Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Ah, yes....tis a good thing the mantis cannot devour the snorers....Great take on the theme.
Mac Donald Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Such a cleverly original write, Graham :) Great luck with the contest, looks like a winner to me! Best wishes, Mikki
Krampe Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 6:58 PM
What a thoroughly FUN poem! Good luck on the contest. Agnes
Mcdaid Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 7:37 AM
beautifully painted piece with great insight wishing you a blessed day
Wigley Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 12:43 AM
A great take on the theme and a fine twist, Grahamburgler. I'm sure it will do well. Regards, Viv
Salehi Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 6:39 PM
I was just thinking of the cricket myself while I was reading your poem. What about the crickets of the world? I'm one of them! Constantly nagging and praying..... Great job... and goodluck...
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 2:50 PM
Brilliantly ended! I enjoyed this. One of the best entries that is sure to get a top placement! : ) 7
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