Eureka

EUREKA She found it — the fountain of life sans bliss. Her wrinkles did hide with a gulp and hiss. Though boobs it did lift, she gluttoned the gift! O dear — she does flail in the great abyss. 12/26/2018 Contest: Bawdy Limerick Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/31/2018 4:50:00 PM

love the imagery Kim, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2018 7:14:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/31/2018 4:45:00 PM

Ha ha, what imagery! Congratulations on your winning placement!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thanks, Tania! Happy New Year!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/26/2018 9:53:00 PM

Nicely done, and just the right mix of bawdy and clever, methinks. Should do very, very well in the contest. Season's best! ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 9:55:00 PM

Thank you, my fine friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2018 4:48:00 PM

reminds me of that movie Goldie hawn was in. Of course I can't remember the title right now but she was living forever due to finding the fountain of youth... with consequences!! Thanks for your comment on my rant poem. I am glad that some like you can understand the point I was making and how hugely disappointed I am in the FDA and doctors.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 8:59:00 PM

I think the movie is Death Becomes Her. You have to be so careful with the medical system, always watching out for yourself and loved ones. <3 Kim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/26/2018 4:48:00 PM

Quick, where's the bottle? Need a little lift myself, Kim. Best wishes in Tania's contest, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 8:59:00 PM

LOL! Don’t we all!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/26/2018 4:42:00 PM

Oh, so deliciously bawdy! Best of luck in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 9:03:00 PM

Thank you! Eureka! I did it ;)