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Eternal Love

Can you hear the humming of the guitars?
They spelt of zeal, eternal and sweet love.
I can still hear them throbbing in my head,
As I can heed the cooing of my dove.

Around the pool swimmers sang lustily,
I jumped into the warm summer water,
Swam slowly towards the singer of love.
He urged me up and asked to escort her

Towards the fragrant rose garden, and kissed
Her red lips that sent me up to heaven.
With her syrupy kiss felt bliss and joy.
Promised eternal love which was given.

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Joanna Daniel February 2, 2022 at 5:44 AM Great expression of love here, Victor, you have outdone yourself:)

Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 2:32 PM What lady would not swoon over this romantic poem Victor? A Valentine for lovers of Valentine’s Day! I adored it! Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos February 1, 2022 at 9:33 AM You are still the best with your tantalising romantic writes my friend. Awesome poem. Hugs blessings Jennifer.

Delice Arleen Skelly January 31, 2022 at 3:36 AM Lovely romantic write...Delice

M. L. Kiser January 30, 2022 at 4:53 PM Beautifully done Victor, very romantic scene between these two.

Jan Allison January 30, 2022 at 12:38 PM oh how beautiful and romantic, you are so talented writing these poems my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2022 at 9:44 PM romantic eternal love. very nice , Victor

Sara Kendrick January 29, 2022 at 2:09 PM Ahh!! Eternal love that was given. That is so romantic. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visits. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 29, 2022 at 11:09 AM Eternal love is wonderful to read about. I love the sweet, romantic images of this verse. Well done!

Lisa Ricci January 29, 2022 at 9:13 AM Hello Victor - Words of love will always melt a reader’s heart and soul and you did with this reader. Such a beautiful and healthy love at that. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Remain safe and sound... Blessings always

Harry Horsman January 28, 2022 at 10:15 PM Oh these are wonderful memories Victor. so lovely is your poetry

Sally Eslinger January 28, 2022 at 2:06 PM Victor, dear heart, how sweetly, warmly your lines read this afternoon as snow is falling across 65 million customers of good, warm electricity this day in USA. Haha. An endearing, gifting poem here. xoxo Blessings!

Anil Deo January 28, 2022 at 9:16 AM brother, she will always be yours, and eternally faithful and romantic. thanks to Lisa Ricci (where is she; missing her too), i know of love you shared and now share ETERNALLY, shalom. shalom

Debra L Brown January 28, 2022 at 8:56 AM You're a true romantic, Victor. This is a beautiful poetry. Excellent writing. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues January 28, 2022 at 8:45 AM Lovely imagery and interesting the singing of the swimmers…like a romantic musical! ~ hugs

Eve Roper January 28, 2022 at 8:38 AM So very romantic, Victor.. hugs my friend

Vijay Pandit January 28, 2022 at 6:07 AM Yes--I hear the music of love. Cheerful, romantic write, Victor.

Mystic Rose Rose January 28, 2022 at 6:04 AM no greater love then the one that is eternal, it never dies, it flowers back every year, :)

Sotto Poet January 28, 2022 at 5:38 AM Victor, you've always been the king of romantic poetry. And your well-written poetry showing lovely summer settings is beautiful. I'm sure your dearly departed wife (May she rest in peace) counted herself fortunate to have someone like you at her side.

Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 3:11 AM 'Red lips and syrupy kiss".... Very very romantic !

Tom Cunningham January 28, 2022 at 2:28 AM Very summer romantic imagery Victor, you are the master of romance. Tom