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Etched Within

Prolific page of promise Within the wandering mind Beautifully held within Lost in breaths of time Amid the river's glory Of silken light dissolve The lonely leaf of solitude Drowns without resolve Fading through the season Each flowers gone with time Drooping in a final plea Windswept within my mind And now the rusted memories Fading as I climb Searching for my long lost love Etched within my mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/5/2018 3:29:00 PM
Congrats on your podium win, Rick. Well done.
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Date: 5/29/2018 7:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done!
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Date: 5/29/2018 12:45:00 PM
Beauiful, Rick. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Elaine
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Date: 7/26/2017 9:20:00 PM
I love the imagery - "lonely leaf of solitude" is just wonderful!
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Date: 7/23/2017 3:02:00 PM
Rick such a well written poem with the words reaching the reader. I can feel it :)
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Date: 7/23/2017 10:22:00 AM
Melancholy, but BEAUTIFUL words of loneliness, Rick.
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Rick Parise
Date: 7/23/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you !!!! Blessings to you and yours..............

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