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Escher - Three Spheres Lipogram A

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reflections become obsessions self - within/without times this by three self - over exposed forever there, inside the sphere etched into being lucidity or fluidity obscured/mirrored tension felt cognitively eyes meet eyes seen yet unseen third eye sees nothing yin diminishes yin three becomes six six becomes nine nine becomes twelve nothing more to see though I look directly into my own soul still I know less

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/30/2023 3:45:00 PM

Back with big congratulations Di11y! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/30/2023 11:47:00 PM

Thank you Linda, much appreciated x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 10/30/2023 1:44:00 PM

Terrific poem D Utterly surprised it didn't rank higher.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/30/2023 2:08:00 PM

I was quietly impressed with this one, if Brian has a contest that allows old poems I might give it another ride out. Thanks for your enthusiasm x

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/30/2023 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations Dilly! Your amazing poem "Escher", has earned you a distinguished place in my poetry contest. I was very strict, but your poem rose to the winner's circle. Very well done my friend, Emile.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/30/2023 12:34:00 PM

Many thanks Emile - much appreciated

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/9/2023 6:45:00 AM

Wow - what Paige said - captivating! Love it! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/9/2023 8:27:00 AM

I can't lie Linda, I was quite pleased with this one haha ;) thank you for your kind comment <3

Paige Hind

Date: 10/3/2023 9:35:00 PM

A fav of mine, DD! I am totally captivated.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/3/2023 10:45:00 PM

I really got into this one and it made it interesting to consider word choices without the letter a. Thank you Paige - I appreciate your enthusiastic comment x