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Escape From the City

Mountains with vibrant floras
Led down to fruit laden orchards
In the verdant vales below.
I heard her then, a syrupy song
Of tender love and feats of old.
I stood beneath an apple tree
As her song wafted on the breeze,
Sliding in and around the fruit trees,
Scattering aromatic fragrance around.

Serendipitously I came onto a small farm.
A small river wended its tortuous way. 
A small bridge took me to several patches 
Where vegetation grew.  I could live there forever.

All around I enjoyed the serenity 
That I had craved for but rarely found.
Swiftly night descended as the moon 
Rose from beyond the low hills.

How I enjoyed the evening farm food 
Where I was invited and then 
A good night sleep in their spare bedroom.
But morn came, and grudgingly had to leave.

Back into the heart of the city,
Large edifices, black with age.
Everywhere the smell of stale food, burning oil,
And a hint of smoked marijuana.
O to be rich and escape forever
To my lovely vale, now so far away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Horsman Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 10:43 PM
Lovely to read your poetry, Victor, this one amazing.
Anaya Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:16 PM
I took this same trip, I called it a walk-about, it lasted days and nights, the contrast of the city and the hills, just amazing Victor...Of course it was Santa Barbara! You are amazing!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 3:33 PM
As her song wafted on the breeze, Sliding in and around the fruit trees, Scattering aromatic fragrance around.
Skelly Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 7:36 AM
Wonderful country life..Delice
Tor Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 10:54 PM
Love your words Victor, it makes you want to be there, to enjoy its pleasantries. God bless you...
Poet Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Victor, your imagery is stunning, and your poetry is really nicely written. After that, all that's left to do is sprinkle a little bit of passion over the bucolic landscape, and we'll have reached the paradise.
Seeker Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 6:43 PM
Beautiful pic, Victor! Add the tender touch of love to the rural setting and we’re then in nirvana
Buehler Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 5:28 PM
The contrast between city and country life is sometimes very stark. Your usual vibrant imagery and gift for storytelling has created once again a captivating tale. Evelyn
Jones Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Yes the country is so relaxing. Your poem brings it to life! Nice photo!
M  Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 8:20 AM
I always have to readjust to city life after country living…..great poem and very relatable Victor…..Debx
Pandit Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Wonderful images--enjoyed the trip through your words to the serene land. Expertly conveyed, as always, Victor.
Daniel Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 5:18 AM
It sure sounds enchanting, Victor:) I can picture it in my mind:)
George Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 2:24 AM
To what an enchanting place you have been, though for a brief time. The idyllic bliss of the beautiful valley will definitely be appealing to the dweller of a city in a concrete jungle... ! Really enjoyed your poem Victor...
Cunningham Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 1:30 AM
Made that move over 30 years ago and don't miss the city one bit. Tom
Roper Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 12:32 AM
Your movement through imagery is sweet and inviting. I love the country of farms scenes and mountain ranges so very serene and the air so pure and fresh when you drive by. Blessing friend
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 12:30 AM
It sounds like a little piece of heaven Victor. The great outdoors away from the city enthralls. I enjoyed your poem Victor. Have a great day. Blessings xxoo
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