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Erosion - 1 and 2

Erosion - 1 With a scholar eye I am looking at- Looking at Sharpened Dream, Burning heart burning across Feeling the sour, feeling the layer Is being wet tongue, gradually uncovered vibrating lips and stick while mixing at liquor - A chemical compound searching for eyes - Searching liberty from sin - Burning the recipe of purity I am chewing all the glamour with tortured eyes Breathing fragrance; breathing easily passing days and nights Easily being tortured, told her- As its an erosion ; it’s a feelings Written by Javed Akter Erosion – 2 Sharp Sunshine ; I become anxious sharpened me while it touches the ground Like homeless lives I search forever Blue ; blue feelings always Walking around Always sliding doors are crawling Crawling ever now and then Kindly me; myself kind while waking up After long night sleepless; sleeveless From deadly bed Changing everything; changing backbone slowly Steadily this side and that Every time looking at decay -Decay altering the sides my feelings ; herself towards

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Date: 1/5/2010 8:57:00 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
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Date: 1/4/2010 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Javed. May you have may more. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2009 11:55:00 PM
THANKS ALL MY FRIEND AND FAN FOR YOUR KIND SUPPORT.
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Date: 9/26/2009 10:37:00 AM
Javed, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 11:12:00 PM
Congrates on your wonderful poems going through to the finals ... Love Jayne
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:10:00 PM
Dear javed, Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:57:00 PM
Javed, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:28:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Javed.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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