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Erosion 111

limestone particles drift into oblivion sediments the sea Inspired by Raul's photo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/8/2009 9:34:00 AM
your conclusion couldn't have been written better... The whole series flowed nicely.... Keep your sword slicing, young knight.....:JP]
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Date: 10/8/2009 8:24:00 AM
Brilliant series, Brian! Highly inspired work and an inspiration to look at things from many different angles. As always, thank you for sharing! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/8/2009 8:23:00 AM
Raul will have a difficult time choosing! ~ :)
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Date: 10/8/2009 7:26:00 AM
Great visual...Love Light Truth Patricia
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