Eros

The early morning harbors our secrets I am lifted by her love Surrounded and fed embraced by her love Late at night I compare the moon to her face But the moon does not have her ruby sweet lips Sex was the seed her kisses the flower passion is our fragrance...

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/4/2013 4:46:00 PM

I like the gentleness in this :) Thanks so much for stopping by, reading and commenting on my verse. Light & Love

Ken Carroll
Date: 12/4/2013 4:49:00 PM

Thank you as well Debbie for visiting.. Ken

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/9/2013 12:39:00 AM

A very beautiful poem!

Ken Carroll
Date: 11/9/2013 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Arthur.. Ken

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/6/2013 9:15:00 AM

Very, very romantic. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Ken Carroll
Date: 11/6/2013 11:41:00 AM

Hola Lucilla, Gracias por leer! Ken

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/3/2013 10:43:00 AM

the flow of this work blends with the wave of passion running along this page, ken..." but the moon does not have her ruby sweet lips.." that nailed it!..:) huggs

Ken Carroll
Date: 11/3/2013 5:32:00 PM

Hi Nette, Thank you for the wonderful comment! Ken

Len Gasun

Date: 11/2/2013 11:14:00 PM

Splendid passionate write this is my dear friend Ken. A great write indeed. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for taking your time to read my first horror story/poem. thank you so much for everything! have a nice weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Ken Carroll
Date: 11/2/2013 11:19:00 PM

Hi Leonora, Thank you for a lovely visit.. Ken

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/2/2013 5:49:00 PM

this is awesome poetry,,

Ken Carroll
Date: 11/2/2013 6:04:00 PM

Hi Harry, Thank you for the most kind comment.. Ken

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/31/2013 8:14:00 PM

I love how you compare her to the moon...the moon is soft, sensual and beautiful as is your poem...fine piece of writing Ken :)

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/31/2013 8:25:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Thank you for the beautiful visit.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/31/2013 5:13:00 PM

dazzling beautiful piece old friend

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/31/2013 5:33:00 PM

Hey Liam, thanks buddy for the wonderful comment. Ken

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/31/2013 3:59:00 PM

:) Eros....yes, physical love......beautiful..as is your write, Ken......Fantastic work. The moon comparison is so lovely...Here, when someone is beautiful, they call her...Moon. I loved this...

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/31/2013 4:06:00 PM

Hi Eileen, thank you my friend for stopping by.. Ken

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2013 2:45:00 PM

Ahhh!!! Passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/31/2013 2:47:00 PM

Hi Sara, thank you for stopping by to read this one! Ken