Ken Carroll Poet Free verse

Eros

The early morning
harbors our secrets

I am lifted
by her love

Surrounded and fed
embraced by her love

Late at night
I compare
the moon to her face

But the moon
does not have
her ruby sweet lips

Sex was the seed
her kisses the flower
passion is our fragrance...

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Debbie Guzzi December 4, 2013 at 4:46 PM I like the gentleness in this :) Thanks so much for stopping by, reading and commenting on my verse. Light & Love Ken Carroll December 4, 2013 at 4:49 PM Thank you as well Debbie for visiting.. Ken

Arthur Vaso November 9, 2013 at 12:39 AM A very beautiful poem! Ken Carroll November 9, 2013 at 8:36 AM Thank you Arthur.. Ken

Lucilla Carrillo November 6, 2013 at 9:15 AM Very, very romantic. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Ken Carroll November 6, 2013 at 11:41 AM Hola Lucilla, Gracias por leer! Ken

Nette Onclaud November 3, 2013 at 10:43 AM the flow of this work blends with the wave of passion running along this page, ken..." but the moon does not have her ruby sweet lips.." that nailed it!..:) huggs Ken Carroll November 3, 2013 at 5:32 PM Hi Nette, Thank you for the wonderful comment! Ken

Len Gasun November 2, 2013 at 11:14 PM Splendid passionate write this is my dear friend Ken. A great write indeed. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for taking your time to read my first horror story/poem. thank you so much for everything! have a nice weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Ken Carroll November 2, 2013 at 11:19 PM Hi Leonora, Thank you for a lovely visit.. Ken

Harry Horsman November 2, 2013 at 5:49 PM this is awesome poetry,, Ken Carroll November 2, 2013 at 6:04 PM Hi Harry, Thank you for the most kind comment.. Ken

Sandra Adams October 31, 2013 at 8:14 PM I love how you compare her to the moon...the moon is soft, sensual and beautiful as is your poem...fine piece of writing Ken :) Ken Carroll October 31, 2013 at 8:25 PM Hi Sandra, Thank you for the beautiful visit.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid October 31, 2013 at 5:13 PM dazzling beautiful piece old friend Ken Carroll October 31, 2013 at 5:33 PM Hey Liam, thanks buddy for the wonderful comment. Ken

Eileen Manassian October 31, 2013 at 3:59 PM :) Eros....yes, physical love......beautiful..as is your write, Ken......Fantastic work. The moon comparison is so lovely...Here, when someone is beautiful, they call her...Moon. I loved this... Ken Carroll October 31, 2013 at 4:06 PM Hi Eileen, thank you my friend for stopping by.. Ken

Sara Kendrick October 31, 2013 at 2:45 PM Ahhh!!! Passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Ken Carroll October 31, 2013 at 2:47 PM Hi Sara, thank you for stopping by to read this one! Ken