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Erin's

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Erin's Show

On March Seventeenth, let’s be clear
You sin if you don’t drink green beer
But Tim won’t partake
He must stay awake
When Erin goes Bragh-less this year

Seems Erin likes putting on shows
And she has no use for bandeaus
She swings wild and free
And yells, “Look at me!”
As double-Ds bounce off her toes



*February 26, 2021
For Tania’s double limerick contest
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Zahid Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Hilarious
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 3:18 PM
Somewhat an exhibitionist in character this Erin. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. Way tooooo funny. Have a blessed day/weekend............
Roper Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Awesome limericks, Carolyn, well deserving win. Congratulations! Hugs Eve
Kitchin Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Carolyn, congratulations on your first place win with your hilarious limericks, made me laugh!
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 1:31 PM
Thanks, Tania!
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 3:00 PM
Yours is not only clever and humorous, but the meter is SPOT on. Congrats on a very well deserved win!
Bauer Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 2:40 AM
A well-deserved win, Carolyn! Great flow and very funny!
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Thanks, Ilene!
Y. Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 8:29 PM
Hi Carolyn, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 3:51 PM
I cant believe i missed reading this gem Carolyn, many congrats on your win :-) hugs jan xx
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 11:11 AM
Your 'Erin go bragh less' pun is priceless - looks like you have the luck of Irish with this :)
Horne Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 12:35 PM
LOL, LOVE this - hilarious
Devonshire Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Thanks, Jack. Let me see what you've been up to...
Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 12:16 PM
I laughed out loud Carolyn. This is indeed hilarious! :) Linda
Devonshire Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Thanks, Linda! Always glad to offer a laugh.
Callus Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 11:37 AM
A double round of applause for you dear Carolyn!! The imagery projected through your words is hilarious:) :) Hope you're keeping well, my friend. Take care. Hugs // paul
Devonshire Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Paul!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 11:42 AM
How I wish to go again to Ireland. Lovely limericks. Got connections there?
Devonshire Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 12:04 PM
No connections, Victor. Just an admiration for Ireland and its people. Thanks for reading.
Theraven Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Carolyn, I love the Limerick and the bouncing show. Swinging in St. Patty's revelry left many a blackened eye you know. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 7:32 PM
GREAT limerick, really great, Carolyn.
Devonshire Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Andrea! Thanks for reading, Carolyn
Wolf Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Women's Lib, I guess. lol. Irish eyes will be smiling, no doubt. Cheers, Gershon
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Hope I gave you a smile too!
Edmonds  Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 3:53 PM
Really funny Carolyn can just imagine the scene. Bragh-Vo ~ Belle
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Thanks for reading, Belle. I'll check your page.
Leffanta Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Clever girl - and funny, too! Should be a winner - at least with the men! Aloha! Rico
Neumann Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 5:42 AM
Very funny.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 3:59 AM
Adorable. Love it... God bless you always, Love, Gina
Pettit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 7:30 PM
I will not miss it. Erin g0-braghless. That's a beautiful phrase!
Laurie Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Hello Carolyn … I certainly had a good giggle over your set of limericks Carolyn - thank you - Lindsay
La France Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Carolyn, so fun, I am terrible at limericks, no funny bone, but will give it a whirl, anyways I have finished my poem, My Inner Voice if you wish to come back _Constance
Canerdy Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Oh, that naughty Erin! Well-written, Carolyn!! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Thanks, Janice. It's always fun to write limericks.
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