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Ephemeral Healing Light

Ephemeral transient light watch me cling to you by night As the eagles soar take flight over mountains of great sight Watch me cling to you by night as I share my evanescent light as I rise with all my might towards the fading, of the night

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Silent One

Date: 3/9/2024 11:16:00 AM

An excellent use of the form dear friend.. nicely done..

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/9/2024 10:10:00 AM

"as I rise with all my might towards the fading, of the night" Indeed, keep splashing the night with glistening glow of your lovely poetry. Well said.

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/8/2024 5:25:00 PM

just delicate and wonderful semtiments expressed, Thanks Rose

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/9/2024 9:35:00 AM

So glad you enjoyed the poem dear Yann, thank you for your kind visit :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/8/2024 4:44:00 PM

you have such a delicate poetic voice, one that softly engages the reader in your words. I echo Daniel's words about grace and acceptance and the transient joys. Superbly done, hugs, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/9/2024 9:35:00 AM

Glad you dipped into the poem and found it meaningful Sara, knowing your precious heart, I'm not surprised, thanks :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/8/2024 4:08:00 PM

Dear Rose, I love how you delicately capture the fleeting beauty and resilience of life’s moments. The imagery of clinging to ephemeral light amidst the darkness echoing the human experience of seeking solace and renewal. Your artistic words carry a sense of grace and acceptance, showing us to cherish the transient joys and find strength in their passing. Such wonderful reflections. - Blessings, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/9/2024 9:34:00 AM

I am so blessed to have poets such as you to send me comments that encourage and make me smile, Thank you