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Enticing Desire

Enchanting me with your lust, drawing me into the fire, of your burning desire, passion in your eyes. For the spicy contest.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/12/2013 11:09:00 PM

Oh, I do love this kind of talk Phyllis ;} thanks for reading over heard conversation. he was always saying mean things to the girlfriend.

James Fraser

Date: 2/13/2011 2:25:00 PM

Ooo la la Phyllis, spicy or what. Lovely Dodoitsu. Many thank you's for your always kind comments....:)

John Freeman

Date: 1/21/2011 5:57:00 PM

Great Job Phyllis with this dodoitsu with the internal rhyme too. Agape, Moses

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 1/21/2011 3:17:00 AM

dear mama, your poetic devise has taken a new dimension. great work.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2011 4:57:00 PM

thankxx Phyllis for your wonderful comment today on my contest entry for Joyce... I too luv all animals but dogs always... we currently have a Shepherd puppy who is naughty and nice... he is the king of this family.. luv.. so glad Joyce chose this fine theme..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/19/2011 5:40:00 AM

Good Morning Phyllis... hope u have a blessed day my friend... with luv..

Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2011 3:21:00 AM

This is really romantic with a nice hint of spice, best of luck in the contest~~

James Peranteau

Date: 1/19/2011 1:38:00 AM

Tiz definately "spicy" dear poet ! Great write Phyllis ! much love, james

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/18/2011 9:16:00 PM

Very nice poem...Good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2011 7:43:00 PM

Soup Mail..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 7:40:00 PM

Phyllis, so nice to see a new poem of yours up. I enjoyed it and wish you well in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/18/2011 6:04:00 PM

Nice sensual and passionate write, Phyllis

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2011 11:52:00 AM

Great job Phyllis.. but who told u ..u could not use that title before? please let me know my friend.. thankxxx..

Liz Walsh

Date: 1/18/2011 11:41:00 AM

Gorgeous - Liz

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/18/2011 9:39:00 AM

what every man needs , a willing subject. lol john

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2011 9:38:00 AM

Wow!!!! A winner in my books. Thank you for your kind comments today, Phyllis. If you are referring to the Contest, 'Among the Dead - the Heroine to be a girl named Raven, I have written two of them - so inspired was I by the picture constance posted - The Raven's Revenge and Where the Raven Reigns. I just love writing stories about paintings. Lainie.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2011 9:32:00 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest Phyllis. looks like a winner. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2011 9:12:00 AM

Wow! Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I read this one this morn for I needed a little warmth on this cold, cloudy, and rainy day in Georgia..Your presence at my work sent me a ray not a stingray but a sun ray..Sara

Bilal Hb

Date: 1/18/2011 8:57:00 AM

Short and sweet (or spicy?) I liked it. I have a poem of the same name :) Seems to be a popular theme.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2011 8:49:00 AM

thankxx for supporting Michael's part of the contest Phyllis and good luck .. we will read fully closer to judging time ... appreciate your participation with luv..