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'enthralled'

few anxious moments coffee in hand, our eyes lock hello never said enthralled by you, all sounds hushed just us and my cold coffee ~~~~~~##~~~~~~ *I have drawn my inspiration from MJF's new contest.. This poem is not for the contest though*

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/9/2011 6:48:00 AM

I am always enthralled by your lines Wilma.. your gift is so heightened by your emotional expressions.. my friend.. just needed to read it one more time... have a pleasant week luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2011 2:06:00 PM

wow, here is one I missed and I really like this, Wilma. I guess that coffee grew colder and colder as you sat there mesmerized!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/4/2011 12:31:00 PM

beautiful expression feelings of nearness , Wilma

James Fraser

Date: 4/4/2011 12:20:00 PM

Top Tanka here Wilma, great piece.....:)

James Peranteau

Date: 4/4/2011 9:30:00 AM

I like this Tanka Wilma! I love when terse writes make the reader ponder....have a great week dear poet ! much love, james

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/3/2011 8:42:00 PM

Well that sure is nice, very cool thoughts on being enthralled-- hmm come on, spill the beans (pun intended) which Souper might you be talking about here, missy?? secret keeper, remember?? You can still turn that coffee to frappe though ;) hugs missy!

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/3/2011 7:11:00 PM

I like poems that leave things to be imagined. this poem is very well done in that regard especially, mj

David Byrne

Date: 4/3/2011 4:14:00 PM

love the ordinariness !

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/3/2011 12:39:00 PM

I do like the begining, leaves me hanging though.... the mark of a good poet...leave them wanting more... Nice that I inspired you, made me smile...love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 11:36:00 AM

Pray tell who is this written for Wilma luv? it is so adorable and luv the connotation of the cold coffee as u are so enthralled by the visit of the poet ..good luck in the contest ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2011 10:09:00 AM

You have captured well that moment when eyes first lock. If it's a special connection, is surely is enthralling. Who cares if the coffee grows cold. Just be sure your hearts stay warm! Love, Carolyn