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Enter My Love

In the heart of my heart, you have flown To dance with my soul that is sad This sadness comes from loves I've known I'll let you enter so I won't go mad Tonight our shadowed loneliness, we'll trade When you leave your memory will fade 8/31/19 contest Writing Challenge 4, August 2019-Six lines-Poetry contest Sponsor Dear Heart-Wiishkobi Ode

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Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2019 3:31:00 PM

Frederic, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful rhyming poem of love and the music is sublime, well done !

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2019 5:17:00 PM

such touching words Frederic, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2019 12:27:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 3rd place - touching to read, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/2/2019 11:33:00 AM

It's a lovely song to go with your poignant poem. congrats on your podium win.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/2/2019 11:12:00 AM

Frederic congrats on such s wonderful win!;)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/1/2019 11:00:00 AM

Oh, my, sad on top of sad, but so touching, especially to the lonely who are left lonely.