Enough Already

Where have you been? I’ve worried so.
I feared to leave the nest.
That Mr. Crow was hanging round.
You know he’s such a pest

He taunted me and said that you
were a bold philanderer
and that you’d be deserting me
and running off with her.

I know what he was doing,
just trying to get my goat
so I’d leave our home unguarded.
That would be all she wrote.

Have you eaten? I’ve been waiting
for you to bring some food.
You’ve forgotten it?  How could you?
Mom said you were no good.

I swear I’m going back to her
unless you change your way.
Now come back here!  I am not through.
I’ve plenty more to say.

Get on that nest. It’s your turn now.
I’m going out to eat.
And don’t mess up my nice clean house.
You had  better wipe your feet.

Don’t look at me with those big eyes.
You think you have it tough?
It’s time you took some of the load.
I’ve simply had enough!!



For Francine's "Enough" contest placed at no. 4
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Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Joyce. Love,Carol
Phookan Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win this contest... enjoyed this very funny write and how she asks him to wipe his feet..simply stunning. love,gautami
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Horne Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Many congratulations on your wins, Joyce : )
Richards Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 7:47 AM
I am not surprised this was a winner....so clever and adding the human touch!!! Congratulations, dear Joyce!
Mehta Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:38 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Joyce
Dufresne Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:28 AM
So very funny, Joyce. I enjoyed it much. Sounds familiar somehow.. :) chuckling all the way. Congratulations on a well deserved win . Such a simple little contest and it brought out alot of entertainment! enjoyed
Buckeridge Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 10:05 PM
Great win, congrats to you x
Mannan Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 9:32 PM
Many congrats dear friend for this super win. God Bless always.
Gorelick Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 9:04 PM
"Enough" for a big win.. LOl..Congrats to you..this is great. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Congrats Joyce on your fantastic win in Francine's contest with this terrific entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend...luv..
Ronthorpe Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Good job. Congrats
Devonshire Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 7:57 PM
So happy to see your ranking high, Joyce! Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 7:38 PM
congrats on your fourth place win in my contest Joyce, truly wonderful entry
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 2:29 PM
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Devonshire Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 8:52 AM
Dear Joyce, thanks for letting me know you have computer access. If you want to chat, just shoot me an email and I'll call. Have a podiatry appointment today but will be home later this afternoon. Love, Carolyn
Locksley Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 12:57 PM
This is so funny Joyce. It sounds like my father scolding my mother, or vice versa. Thanks for sharing this humor with me. Good luck in Francine's contest. Best to you, Diane
Sweetheart Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 9:51 PM
An awesome piece Joyce ..good luck in the contest my friend.. a clever take on the photo from Francine.. and a brilliant tale u told .. creative and cleverly penned luv..
Devonshire Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 12:13 PM
LOVE your use of personification here, Joyce! I'm glad this bird is leaving the nest -- she deserves a good dinner. You had me laughing throughout the poem. Well done, dear. I hope your brother's condition has stabilized. Still in my prayers. Love, Carolyn
Hendricks Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Good one, Joyce. I like. Good luck in the contest. :))
Richards Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Oh, this is so funny....so clever to use this as a nagging wife poem!!! Well done, Joyce!!
Long Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 4:46 AM
this was very nice good job! you have a way with words and that is a great talent to have. cory
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 8:33 PM
Awesome, Joyce, a clever well metered poem on that funny bird pair! Luv, Andrea
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