ORIGINAL TITLE - AND THEN I OPENED THAT DOOR
All day long I dreamed of you Lying there so temptingly I couldn’t wait to hold you Just the thought of you filled me with desire I wanted you oh so badly… And then I opened that door The door that separated me from you To my horror I found you had gone You had simply vanished into thin air Lying there in your place was a note I slowly scanned the lilac paper It read … I’m sorry mum I couldn’t resist that last cream scone… I slammed the fridge door shut so hard it nearly fell off its hinges! 06~09~15 Submitted to Mystery Contest Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015
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