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Endurance

The wind grabs and pulls On one leg he faces winter The Egret endures

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Danielle Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 5:49:00 PM

Nice haiku Barbara keep the good work up!............................Danielle

Date: 1/12/2009 1:59:00 PM

Much said in just three lines leaving the reader with something to ponder. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/8/2009 9:32:00 AM

Love the imagery here and the flow of your words and thoughts. If I may suggest eliminating "on" in order to keep the count for the Haiku but otherwise a very good write my friend. Michael

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/6/2009 2:48:00 PM

The name alone says enough, who will be strong enough to mentally to deal with life, great write and enjoyed reading it. have a good day.

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/6/2009 5:33:00 AM

Awesome visual Barbara! Excellent haiku! I just discovered soup mail - did you get my reply? Hope so! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/6/2009 5:28:00 AM

Incredible Haiku Barbara. Lovely picture painted.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 1/6/2009 12:45:00 AM

Great work Barbara, enduring such harsh times is amazing. I love writing haiku's and this is is lovley winter scene painted with the love of words. Elizabeth

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/6/2009 12:25:00 AM

W-o-W, That was wonderful and lovely. Nice to see a lovely picture painted with words...Raul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/5/2009 8:39:00 PM

Beeg My Barbeeg, Do YOU read YOUR E-mails I'm not sure about Soup Mail as i have been checking in every 5 minutes to see if YOU wrote me I miss the sound of YOUR Writes Barbeeg ALWAYS MY Xliamp...HG

Fritz Purdum

Date: 1/5/2009 5:36:00 PM

Great, so much, the imaginary, the message, thank you for your kind words, Fritz

Jim Wilson

Date: 1/5/2009 2:53:00 PM

Very nicely done. Thanks, Jim

Daver Austin

Date: 1/5/2009 2:37:00 PM

OH, yes, Barb, I like this one, this image, the idea. Love, daver

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/5/2009 12:12:00 PM

Beeg, Barbeeg ALWAYS This is a Superb Haiku Very Visual I sent YOU a SOUP Mail Barbeeg YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG