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The thought of endless is so hard to grasp; we live on Earth where most things are finite. Ideas of boundaries, minds must unclasp- can't vision an unbroken, boundless sight. We live on Earth where most things are finite; though eyes behold the sky's infinite stars- can't vision an unbroken, boundless sight beyond this tiny Earth, we deem as ours. Though eyes behold the sky's infinite stars- Abstract- the limitless grand Universe beyond this tiny Earth, we deem as ours- past bottomless cosmos with spheres diverse. Abstract- the limitless grand Universe in everlasting time and space beyond. Past bottomless cosmos with spheres diverse- lies that eternal realm Creation spawned. In everlasting time and space beyond- ideas of boundaries, minds must unclasp- lies that eternal realm Creation spawned; the thought of endless is so hard to grasp. June 6, 2021 ~1st Place~ Contest: Endless Sponsor: Constance LaFrance Judged: 06/13/2021 Words Required: endless, unbroken, boundless, infinite limitless, bottomless, everlasting, eternal (Because the poem form is a Pantoum with repeating lines, some required words appear more than once.)

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Date: 6/19/2021 12:26:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this beautifully penned Pantoum poem and I like the image too _Constance
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:33:00 AM
Wow. Congratulations!
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