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End of the Innocence

* Inspired in part by Don Henley's song "End of the Innocence" End of the Innocence Though many thought the lyrics by Don Henley Spoke of a woman’s loss of virginity The former Eagle claimed nature to be His inspiration for this elegy At the time the Grammy winner was released Henley and other celebs had beseeched Walden Pond be preserved, development ceased Construction crews bowed out, made their retreat Although Henry Thoreau’s favorite spot was saved The End of the Innocence now rolls on waves Laden with black grime from disrupted graves Of extinct species, seeking to convey A message to man now tainting the sea Perhaps it’s a warning as some will perceive But punishment’s due, our Judge may decree “Justifiable homicide” for man’s greed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 10:07:00 AM
this is thought provoking. thanks for honouring me with the placement in your contest. i hope you will enter my contest too. thanks so much. you are a rare gem.
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:19:00 AM
Wonderful perception in relating not only the fate of the Pond, but of how we are trespassing on the very nature of our judgement by our stubborn subordination to greed. Great write! Dan C
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:12:00 AM
Wow is right.....an awesome write Carolyn....Larry
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Date: 6/19/2010 2:50:00 PM
Wow, this one rocked my bones as I read it. It rocks! Bravo! I think you should send this one to BP. I'll pay for the stamp. Love that song!
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Date: 6/19/2010 3:48:00 AM
Powerful poetry telling us that there are many corners coming our way, and man will know what's around them as he will have caused the events > terrific piece Carolyn >> James
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Date: 6/18/2010 7:35:00 PM
What a very timely & informative write this is Carolyn, and written in such a captivating way too--didn't know anything about this... and can I just say that I'm really glad to be reading your poems here...:) --nikko :)
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Date: 6/18/2010 2:27:00 PM
The last line, says it all, Carolyn. Your writing is so truthful and so powerful. Re: 'How a Blue Rose Came to be', it is strictly fictional from my imagination. However, the contest is not listed anymore, so I can't enter it, but I thouht I would post it anyway as I was inspired. Love, Laini
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Date: 6/18/2010 1:35:00 PM
read the book did'nt enjoy it but it is worth preserving. and as far as don henley is concerned i wish i had tickets they'll be here soon. john h loving iii
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