End of the Innocence

*  Inspired in part by Don Henley's song "End of the Innocence"

End of the Innocence

Though many thought the lyrics by Don Henley
Spoke of a woman’s loss of virginity
The former Eagle claimed nature to be
His inspiration for this elegy

At the time the Grammy winner was released
Henley and other celebs had beseeched
Walden Pond be preserved, development ceased
Construction crews bowed out, made their retreat

Although Henry Thoreau’s favorite spot was saved
The End of the Innocence now rolls on waves
Laden with black grime from disrupted graves
Of extinct species, seeking to convey

A message to man now tainting the sea
Perhaps it’s a warning as some will perceive
But punishment’s due, our Judge may decree
“Justifiable homicide” for man’s greed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Adeite Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 10:07 AM
this is thought provoking. thanks for honouring me with the placement in your contest. i hope you will enter my contest too. thanks so much. you are a rare gem.
Cwiak Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Wonderful perception in relating not only the fate of the Pond, but of how we are trespassing on the very nature of our judgement by our stubborn subordination to greed. Great write! Dan C
Belt Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Wow is right.....an awesome write Carolyn....Larry
Harrison Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Wow, this one rocked my bones as I read it. It rocks! Bravo! I think you should send this one to BP. I'll pay for the stamp. Love that song!
Fraser Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 3:48 AM
Powerful poetry telling us that there are many corners coming our way, and man will know what's around them as he will have caused the events > terrific piece Carolyn >> James
K. Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 7:35 PM
What a very timely & informative write this is Carolyn, and written in such a captivating way too--didn't know anything about this... and can I just say that I'm really glad to be reading your poems here...:) --nikko :)
George   Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 2:27 PM
The last line, says it all, Carolyn. Your writing is so truthful and so powerful. Re: 'How a Blue Rose Came to be', it is strictly fictional from my imagination. However, the contest is not listed anymore, so I can't enter it, but I thouht I would post it anyway as I was inspired. Love, Laini
Loving Iii Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 1:35 PM
read the book did'nt enjoy it but it is worth preserving. and as far as don henley is concerned i wish i had tickets they'll be here soon. john h loving iii
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