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Encouragement

It was a clear, beautiful evening The sun still ablaze, a tad too brilliant, Playing out its last moments, The sky, a ruddy glow of luminescence! I was stationed on a park bench Lazily watching the stir and commotion The park was alive as usual With the young and the old- a motley crowd The children’s park was equally vibrant With excited noise, the young on swings n’ see saws Near a slide, I watched two small kids; A girl of about seven and her little brother The girl had already gone down the slide Seeing his sister’s adventurous ride The boy too began scampering up But with each step, his courage seemed to fail And the higher he climbed, the more timid he grew The thought of sliding down from such height Totally unnerved him and he sat down gingerly Wondering what to do, hesitant to take the plunge His sister stood waiting at the foot With hands spread wide and coaxing him to be down But the boy remained unmoved, totally confused The girl with patience, continued to coerce After a few minute’s pause, mustering courage He at last gave himself a wild push The slide came down crashing in a second The impact almost knocking the girl down But she managed to keep both from falling over How like the little boy, we too rely on others in strife For their encouragement to do the hard things in life People need help, with generous souls buoying them up So why not use our words and gestures to lift someone up! If a casual word of ours can make one life brighter Speak such words to make laden hearts lighter Let us all strive thus to be party to a new ministry Of lifting others and watch the wondrous mystery
Placed Fourth Jan.3.2022 Encourage Poetry Contest Sponsor- Regina MacIntosh

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Date: 2/28/2022 3:46:00 AM
Back to Congraulate you on your win. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 2/25/2022 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Encouragement" is a beautiful write. Love It. Have a great/blessed day..................
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Date: 2/21/2022 6:08:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 2/20/2022 3:54:00 AM
Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/4/2022 7:09:00 AM
Valsa, this is an exquisite poem! Empowering and eliciting the utmost sensitivity, we can deliver nourishing affection to each other. Fantastic concept tastefully conveyed.
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Date: 2/4/2022 1:26:00 AM
Wonderful story & message Valsa!
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Date: 2/3/2022 6:42:00 PM
That last stanza, especially that last couplet -- to die for! Wonderful, Valsa!
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Date: 2/3/2022 5:40:00 PM
Beautiful poetry! Inspiring, drawing from us the best response we have to offer one another, that of nurturing love. Excellent message, tenderly presented. Joe.
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Date: 2/3/2022 3:26:00 PM
I enjoyed the story. Just a few encouraging words can change a life. Good luck in the contest. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 2/3/2022 11:21:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Your poem is lovely and I find a kindred spirit in you. We need more love and kindness in this crazy world. I especially love the top two lines of your last verse. Best of luck in contest!
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Date: 2/3/2022 10:30:00 AM
In sharp contrast, I saw a mother disparaging her son for being afraid to jump into the ocean; the more she want on, the more he shook with fear, possibly imagining his mother urging him to die. It is good that you write your view! Aloha!
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Date: 2/3/2022 10:14:00 AM
Great scene, Valsa, the stage of a playground to a tee. The little boy on the slide sounds like my grandson, he loves the slide, but has had a few tumbles headfirst. So, I wait at the end of the slide to give him courage. Good luck in the contest, a winner already.
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Date: 2/3/2022 6:44:00 AM
A winner! Really enjoyed Valsa! Fabulous!
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Date: 2/3/2022 8:05:00 AM
This acknowledgement from a great poet like you is much appreciated. Thanks a lot dear friend .
Date: 2/3/2022 5:35:00 AM
So simply & poignantly penned, with a clarion call to courtesy, humanity, sibling encouragement. Love & civilized lives do begin in play, ,yes child's play. And thanx for being there/ here in my 26 hour ordeal without power. I stopped fearing, praying more: thieves do try to come in on dark nights. 4-6 times, they punched building material & veggies, by cutting my fenced. I'm alive, PTL
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Valsa George
Date: 2/3/2022 5:49:00 AM
Anil, I am right here online to have seen your comment and decided to make an instant response. Without electricity with all systems dysfunctional, I can imagine how hard it is. Still you found time to encourage me with your wonderful comment. I wish the power to be reinstated at the earliest and you be saved from robbers and burglars . Thanks a lot....Stay in peace.
Date: 2/3/2022 4:19:00 AM
Much depth to the essence of your message, Valsa. A story most can relate to and have felt in some ways in their lives. All the best.
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Valsa George
Date: 2/3/2022 4:51:00 AM
Yes, I thought through a story, the message can be delivered more effectively ! Thanks a lot Vijay!
Date: 2/3/2022 3:45:00 AM
a new ministry of lifting others, I think this is the best idea ever. Never thought of it as a Ministry, but it is, or it ought to be dear Valda, love your observant eyes on this one, take care, have a precious day filled with God's eternal love xo
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Valsa George
Date: 2/3/2022 4:50:00 AM
Yes Rose, through a kind word or an encouraging look, how many sullen faces can be turned into smiling ones. So certainly it is a Ministry ! Thanks for your lovely comment!
Date: 2/3/2022 2:12:00 AM
We should always try and help and encourage others who are struggling in life. One day we too might need encouragement. Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom
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Date: 2/3/2022 4:47:00 AM
I appreciate your attitude to life and I find you encouraging ! Thanks a lot Tom.

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