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Enchantress From the Sea

She will rise from the water, in the midday afternoon
Lightly vaulting from darkness and a bright diamond throne
Splashing forth as a fountain, spilling colors of gold
Wearing combs made of seashells, from deep in the cold

She has no tongue, she has no tears
She had no clothes, will mystically appear
No need for air, her hair is fair
Her eyes are clear of unfound love
She is a siren, she is an angel, she is a myth, for many seasons
Is she real, or apparition…, do we see her for a reason?

A stretched out long tail, on bed of kelp-strewn sand
Soaking up the sun rays, to dry golden strands
She bewitches with amusement
While the darting fish play games
She is not just illusion, has no given name

She's a vision from the past, speaks the language of forgetting
Her repertoire of movement, and exquisite, agile form
A creature bathed in mystery, wears pearls of wet adorn

Ever mindful of the music, human splashing rage of oars
And the chorused voice, and shouting force gale winds that blow from shore
She shuts her dimming eyes, where sun will never be...
And dives back to the purple twilight,
And the freedom of the sea


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A. Sharma Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 2:55 AM
Wow that's wonderful Carrie! Congrats on great win!
Cheema Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Carrie, the mermaid myth is brought forth! very beautifully
Guzzi Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Congrad's on your win [much better than mine ;)] Light & Love
Leiser Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 7:59 PM
You describe the mermaid so perfectly in your winning poem, Carrie! Congrats on your win :)
T  Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 6:45 PM
I feel the freedom. CT
Michaels Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Some wonderful imagery there! Congratulations on a well-deserved First Place.
Kimathi Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 3:56 AM
Congratulations to your winning verse Carrie! ^_^
A   Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
Lindley Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:28 PM
Congratulation on your great win. A truly amazing poem my friend!!
Delaney Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:10 PM
Congratulations Carrie: A wonderful poem . SuZ
Lawless Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Excellent Carrie. favorite line "Is she real, or apparition..., do we see her for a reason?" Great win.
Mehta Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on the Hm win in the contest, Carrie
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations for your win Carrie in the contest "Legends" sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
Phookan Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 3:26 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your HM in this amazing contest.Enjoyed this. Love, Gautami
K. Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 11:12 PM
I really love your poem! What a beautifully descriptive piece this is Carrie :) -- I really enjoyed reading this one about the captivating mermaid--I could picture this in my mind so well--congrats for being in the winners' circle! hugs :)
Roberts Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 9:40 PM
congrats on your HM with this wonderful piece Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Congrats on your HM Carrie .. great write ..enjoy with luv..
Johnson Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 7:04 PM
Still one of my favorites as I said before. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Congratulations Carrie on you worthy poem's success with the HM. Great job. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 5:25 PM
A dreamy vision and journey I do not want to came back from. Beautiful! Carrie. many congrats on your win. Lainie
Taylor Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Outstanding piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
Devonshire Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 11:13 AM
I thought this was beautiful, Carrie. In some cases John and I were far apart in our rankings. Congratulations on your success in the contest. The competition was strong so you can be proud of your placement! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 4:41 AM
What a lovely story with such vivid images. many congrats.
Horsman Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 10:57 PM
Wonderful Carrie, such a joy to read, you make her sound so real. congrats. Harry
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