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She will rise from the water, in the midday afternoon Lightly vaulting from darkness and a bright diamond throne Splashing forth as a fountain, spilling colors of gold Wearing combs made of seashells, from deep in the cold She has no tongue, she has no tears She had no clothes, will mystically appear No need for air, her hair is fair Her eyes are clear of unfound love She is a siren, she is an angel, she is a myth, for many seasons Is she real, or apparition…, do we see her for a reason? A stretched out long tail, on bed of kelp-strewn sand Soaking up the sun rays, to dry golden strands She bewitches with amusement While the darting fish play games She is not just illusion, has no given name She's a vision from the past, speaks the language of forgetting Her repertoire of movement, and exquisite, agile form A creature bathed in mystery, wears pearls of wet adorn Ever mindful of the music, human splashing rage of oars And the chorused voice, and shouting force gale winds that blow from shore She shuts her dimming eyes, where sun will never be... And dives back to the purple twilight, And the freedom of the sea ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------

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Date: 10/23/2015 2:55:00 AM
Wow that's wonderful Carrie! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 10/22/2015 9:27:00 PM
Carrie, the mermaid myth is brought forth! very beautifully
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Date: 10/22/2015 8:17:00 PM
Congrad's on your win [much better than mine ;)] Light & Love
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Date: 10/22/2015 7:59:00 PM
You describe the mermaid so perfectly in your winning poem, Carrie! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/22/2015 6:45:00 PM
I feel the freedom. CT
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Date: 8/19/2014 12:48:00 PM
Some wonderful imagery there! Congratulations on a well-deserved First Place.
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Date: 8/19/2014 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations to your winning verse Carrie! ^_^
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:24:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:28:00 PM
Congratulation on your great win. A truly amazing poem my friend!!
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie: A wonderful poem . SuZ
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Date: 8/17/2014 6:08:00 PM
Excellent Carrie. favorite line "Is she real, or apparition..., do we see her for a reason?" Great win.
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Date: 4/13/2011 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on the Hm win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 4/13/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Carrie in the contest "Legends" sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your HM in this amazing contest.Enjoyed this. Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:12:00 PM
I really love your poem! What a beautifully descriptive piece this is Carrie :) -- I really enjoyed reading this one about the captivating mermaid--I could picture this in my mind so well--congrats for being in the winners' circle! hugs :)
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:40:00 PM
congrats on your HM with this wonderful piece Carrie
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:12:00 PM
Congrats on your HM Carrie .. great write ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 7:04:00 PM
Still one of my favorites as I said before. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:28:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on you worthy poem's success with the HM. Great job. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:25:00 PM
A dreamy vision and journey I do not want to came back from. Beautiful! Carrie. many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 4/12/2011 1:31:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Outstanding piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:13:00 AM
I thought this was beautiful, Carrie. In some cases John and I were far apart in our rankings. Congratulations on your success in the contest. The competition was strong so you can be proud of your placement! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 4:41:00 AM
What a lovely story with such vivid images. many congrats.
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:57:00 PM
Wonderful Carrie, such a joy to read, you make her sound so real. congrats. Harry
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