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Empty Room She has left her room, The college child, Grown and gone she is, For a while to be wild. On her dresser there lies A box of treasures left behind, Remembrances of childhood days, One day to return and find. Beads made by Indians Dug out of the ground On a family vacation Out of town. A pressed rose from the prom, Not quite dried through, A teddy bear necklace, The faded picture of a boy who grew. A new box, a computer, is for today, But tomorrow she will find A painted box of treasures That today she left behind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/19/2018 12:26:00 PM
Evokes memories and forgotten treasures. Beautiful!
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Date: 5/4/2018 2:12:00 AM
The image is so vivid that I can see every single treasured memory! A wonderful nostalgic beauty! I enjoyed reading. Stay blessed.
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Date: 4/29/2018 11:24:00 AM
you capture nostalgia so well, sun... a gem!..huggs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/3/2018 6:29:00 PM
What a nice comment, Nette! Thank you.
Date: 4/28/2018 6:47:00 AM
Excellent--enjoyed reading you poem SW.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/3/2018 6:28:00 PM
You're very kind, Vijay. I always enjoy reading yours.
Date: 4/28/2018 3:05:00 AM
A painted box of treasures. Nice one, Kai
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/3/2018 6:28:00 PM
Thank you, Kai.

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