Empty Room

Empty Room

She has left her room,
The college child,
Grown and gone she is,
For a while to be wild.

On her dresser there lies
A box of treasures left behind,
Remembrances of childhood days,
One day to return and find.

Beads made by Indians
Dug out of the ground
On a family vacation
Out of town.

A pressed rose from the prom,
Not quite dried through,
A teddy bear necklace,
The faded picture of a boy who grew.

A new box, a computer, is for today,
But tomorrow she will find
A painted box of treasures
That today she left behind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 2:12 AM
The image is so vivid that I can see every single treasured memory! A wonderful nostalgic beauty! I enjoyed reading. Stay blessed.
Onclaud Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 11:24 AM
you capture nostalgia so well, sun... a gem!..huggs
Wanter Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:29 PM
What a nice comment, Nette! Thank you.
Pandit Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Excellent--enjoyed reading you poem SW.
Wanter Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:28 PM
You're very kind, Vijay. I always enjoy reading yours.
Neumann Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 3:05 AM
A painted box of treasures. Nice one, Kai
Wanter Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Thank you, Kai.
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