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Empty Nest With Shuttered Dreams

Reclusing in my solitary lair Empty nest with no engineer, consort Sparsely furnished with building blocks for a brighter day Enshrouded by walls that elicit dreams, hopes Alternately, that limit my size and scope Upscale plans to renovate bland lifestyle To lay the blueprint for a new, broader course Caged by my nominal status and working class background Burnished with colloquial, mundane mortar Blank slate on which to construct a higher order But shackled to a past decorated with a static border Misery compounded by the encroaching, empty spaces Contented to loiter, pine my detached estate Slowly molding the finish so I can climb the staircase of fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/26/2010 8:55:00 AM
WOWOWOWOW griped by every line poet friend .... thank you for asking me to read this great write i will be reading more of your work ,you write with passion this is what makes our work alive ...Love it !!! sarah x
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Date: 11/22/2010 8:40:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful and brilliantly composed a thought provoking write. You last line is quite appealing, 'Slowly molding the finish so I can climb the staircase of fate'. You have great writing potentials my friend. Hope to enjoy your other creative Poems soon and many thanks for your kind and precious comments on my Poem 'Pleasure of Moving on Moon' Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Stephen P
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:42:00 AM
I doubt you're doing much loitering Stephen. I am enjoying your postings. Love, joyce
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:15:00 AM
Good morning Steve, glad i ran into your name today,, you got highly recommended by another poet, bragging how you are such a talented poet.. after reading your poem i find it very brilliant and interesting. The emptiness WOW~ one can only want to open the bottle to full up that empty void. Love the thought provoking idea of thinking how to get there.. ((caged, blank, solitaire, empty nest..)) love the way you stuck to the engineering meaning,..Miss P.D.
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Date: 11/18/2010 12:42:00 PM
I enjoyed your nice poem on Empty nest with nice images, Stephen
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