Empty Nest With Shuttered Dreams

Reclusing in my solitary lair
Empty nest with no engineer, consort
Sparsely furnished with building blocks for a brighter day
Enshrouded by walls that elicit dreams, hopes
Alternately, that limit my size and scope
Upscale plans to renovate bland lifestyle
To lay the blueprint for a new, broader course
Caged by my nominal status and working class background
Burnished with colloquial, mundane mortar
Blank slate on which to construct a higher order
But shackled to a past decorated with a static border
Misery compounded by the encroaching, empty spaces
Contented to loiter, pine my detached estate
Slowly molding the finish so I can climb the staircase of fate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hales Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 8:55 AM
WOWOWOWOW griped by every line poet friend .... thank you for asking me to read this great write i will be reading more of your work ,you write with passion this is what makes our work alive ...Love it !!! sarah x
Kapoor Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Amazingly beautiful and brilliantly composed a thought provoking write. You last line is quite appealing, 'Slowly molding the finish so I can climb the staircase of fate'. You have great writing potentials my friend. Hope to enjoy your other creative Poems soon and many thanks for your kind and precious comments on my Poem 'Pleasure of Moving on Moon' Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Stephen P
Johnson Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 9:42 AM
I doubt you're doing much loitering Stephen. I am enjoying your postings. Love, joyce
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November 19, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Good morning Steve, glad i ran into your name today,, you got highly recommended by another poet, bragging how you are such a talented poet.. after reading your poem i find it very brilliant and interesting. The emptiness WOW~ one can only want to open the bottle to full up that empty void. Love the thought provoking idea of thinking how to get there.. ((caged, blank, solitaire, empty nest..)) love the way you stuck to the engineering meaning,..Miss P.D.
Mehta Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 12:42 PM
I enjoyed your nice poem on Empty nest with nice images, Stephen
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