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Empty Jars

Empty things-

Empty rooms-filled with things-
Empty vases-empty jars
Empty seats-
Cupboards that are bare-

Corridors-in my mind-
Long and narrow-alone I stare-
Vacant land -
You once – were there!  

17/11/92    

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/30/2012 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations Victoria x
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Date: 1/29/2012 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Brenda. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Reading this easily places vivid images in my mind.
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Date: 1/28/2012 7:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend, bl
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Date: 1/28/2012 7:39:00 PM
wow, I would have rated this one higher. It's unique and I love what you are saying here. Congrats on your win, Brenda!!
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Date: 1/28/2012 1:01:00 PM
Brenda congrats on your win, nice take on the theme..David
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:33:00 PM
congrats Brenda on a splendid win for superb poetry on jars theme luv..
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:01:00 PM
I like this Brenda. I would have scored it higher. Congratulations
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