Brenda Victoria Northeast Poet Alliteration

Empty Jars

Empty things-

Empty rooms-filled with things-
Empty vases-empty jars
Empty seats-
Cupboards that are bare-

Corridors-in my mind-
Long and narrow-alone I stare-
Vacant land -
You once – were there!  

17/11/92

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 30, 2012 at 3:36 AM Congratulations Victoria x

Carol Sunshine Brown January 29, 2012 at 10:59 AM Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Brenda. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit January 29, 2012 at 12:29 AM Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Reading this easily places vivid images in my mind.

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2012 at 7:39 PM wow, I would have rated this one higher. It's unique and I love what you are saying here. Congrats on your win, Brenda!!

Bl Devnath January 28, 2012 at 7:39 PM Congrats on your win my friend, bl

David Williams January 28, 2012 at 1:01 PM Brenda congrats on your win, nice take on the theme..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 28, 2012 at 12:33 PM congrats Brenda on a splendid win for superb poetry on jars theme luv..

Bob Quigley January 28, 2012 at 12:01 PM I like this Brenda. I would have scored it higher. Congratulations