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Empty Cafe

Thought of the once busy café gone dull Brings me ideas that at once I’ll mull Not knowing the reason for the escape I strongly desire to join the landscape The lonely feeling is what I soon want Semblance of a café is what does taunt I enjoy empty seats, I love the peace Do they make enough cash to pay the lease How long can this sentimental time last Will it take me beyond and to the past Not a soul is coming, I’ll enjoy this The enlightenment brings me total bliss I don’t know why this café is empty I enjoy the calm and real harmony Russell Sivey Contest: CAFE MUSINGS Sponsor: nette onclaud 1/27/2014

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Date: 2/21/2014 8:06:00 AM
Good morning Russell....congratulations on your win with this calm feeling poem...I enjoyed it...
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Date: 2/15/2014 7:29:00 PM
Early, early morn i thought? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2014 5:58:00 AM
Nice piece, Russell! Congratulations on your winning work!!!
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Date: 2/11/2014 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/11/2014 1:25:00 PM
Great winning work..Sara
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Date: 2/11/2014 7:59:00 AM
Lovely write on the café musings and congrats on the win, russell
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Date: 2/11/2014 7:03:00 AM
Russell glad to see this do well congrats on fine win hugs
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Date: 2/11/2014 12:57:00 AM
Congrats for your deserved victory in this contest Russell.
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Date: 2/10/2014 11:39:00 PM
Congrats on the win. CTB
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Date: 1/30/2014 9:30:00 PM
Ah sounds like an old mom and pop place..they are mostly going out of business slowly...so sad...but comfortable and peaceful.....nice enjoyable poem Russell...
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Date: 1/29/2014 10:42:00 PM
Nice one, Russell. I think it sounds like a great place to be.
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Date: 1/28/2014 10:52:00 PM
It seems like a lonely place, but I understand that you enjoy the calm. I have seen places like that peaceful and quiet. Thanks for sharing. Much luck in the contest...... Lucilla
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Date: 1/28/2014 8:03:00 PM
We need a coffee that, will bring total bliss. well done...SKAT
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Date: 1/28/2014 11:31:00 AM
a great flow to this poem Russell gl in contest it will do well Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/28/2014 10:26:00 AM
Good one , a likely winning one ;good luck Russel. Kayod5.
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Date: 1/28/2014 1:25:00 AM
Very nicely written. I enjoyed the read.
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