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Empty Bottle Life

Just another caterpillar afternoon, inching along lazily; Skin feeling how faint the prairie wind blow, time no longer telling you how slow the summer grass grow So you take another sip of blackberry boredom Bordeaux, as the sun and your insides warm you Pear-shaped tears now fully ripe, puts you in the mood for some mellow regret ... Got no kids, got no wife So you just take another sip from a nearly empty bottle life You spilt a lot of your fine good wine long ago; wasted a lot of your youthful years running in and out of bars, jails and bordellos All of your acquaintances are people you barely know, and your most fond, intimate memories comes from a radio So you go give yourself one last toast from that almost empty bottle ... Now you’re about ready to close your eyes, and dream of another lazy, morning sunrise Sadly, you got nobody around to give cheers to your empty bottle life This poem was inspired from a poem titled "Only A Game" by the talented poet, Phil Capitano

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/24/2017 6:08:00 AM
Good Morning Freddie. My goodness this is very sad. Your words reach the reader with such thought expression and emotion. Honestly. May the bottle never be empty. Have a wonderful morning and day. Well done and expressed.
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Date: 6/22/2017 8:39:00 AM
Sharp, precise, witty, gritty, Freddie you cut me to the core with your brilliance, your pen is laser-like exposing the parts of life that don't get seen. Thanks for the call-out, you muse me too.
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Date: 6/22/2017 5:53:00 AM
Very profound and challenging poem that we can learn a lot of lessons dearest, Freddie! Didactic!
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Date: 6/21/2017 6:55:00 PM
- From the title I could feel it was a sad poem, Freddie - The bottle is a lonely friend, great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2017 3:54:00 PM
Reminds me of someone I usta be Freddie, well done my friend...
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Date: 6/21/2017 2:24:00 PM
Yes, Sad, but a very enjoyable read nonetheless! Phil is a great poet too! Just as you are RW!
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Date: 6/21/2017 1:41:00 PM
This was sad my friend but you had me at the opening line. "Just another caterpillar afternoon" How cool was that. After reading that I had no choice, the poem hooked me, sad or not. Really nicely done.
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Date: 6/21/2017 9:36:00 AM
Very sad, Freddie but it's wonderful Phil's poem inspired you to write:) GREAT job!
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