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Empty

Empty

The gas tank is empty. 
I have five more miles to go. 
The car glides to a stop, 
beside the road. 

I get out. 
I push it further on, 
into the dirt and brush. 
There is a hush, 
deep in my soul. 
"How can things be worse?" 

I grab my keys, 
my purse, my things. 
I lock the doors 
and leave a note out on the shield. 

"I will be back, it is a fact, please do not take away
my only ride... as the ocean of life has risen, 
I am near-drowning now."

I turn toward the empty road, 
and know that I must hurry. 
There is dinner to prepare, 
and my family is already home. 
They are alone, 
and they should not be, 
but I can not try harder 
than I already do...
lest I fail completely. 
Perfection, a goal, 
a commitment, 
but not attainable 
or realistic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 4:36 PM
'The ocean of life has risen...' 'How can things be worse?...' Glad to see that your concerns were/are well-placed: Your family is expecting you. Now THAT's crucial, alright. ~ Commitment and Faith, gw
Foster Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Thank you for your comments... They lift me and give me hope to write again... Ann
Deo Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 9:17 PM
Yes, Ann: if we get to know you, we depend on you. Your Muse, your Presence, your work are all so good and needed. THanks for helping me write again (nothing fancy yet). Glad you like my KAALNEK., too. shalom, shalom
Foster Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Write, write, write...yes, yes, yes... share your insides with the outside. Stand tall, and be who you are supposed to be. Ann
Buehler Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 4:04 PM
Your wonderful poem is so relatable and wise, Ann. Enjoy your week, Evelyn :)
Foster Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 8:48 AM
Thank you, kind friend. May the Lord truly bless your day. Ann
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