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Emptiness

Just another day.. In the woods.. The sun is shining.. There is a floral scent in the air with the arrival of spring. Though the sun is shining, I cannot feel the warmth of the sun.. Though there is a floral scent in the air, I cannot smell the scent.. Emptiness has surrounded my body.. Tears has rolled onto my cheeks almost blinding my eyes.. Ahead in the distance.. I saw a bright gleaming light.. A light that made me feel warm inside.. I heard a voice.. The voice said... DO NOT FEEL SAD MY CHILD.. FOR I WILL COMFORT YOU.. I knew then.. I was touched by the light..

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Date: 2/24/2018 8:39:00 PM
Holy shit. You described " Dasien". Awesome. Your body wrote that didn't it. Best poem I've ever read. Seriously. How did you know? The clearing.Though you didn't mention it was there. That is powerful. My hats off to you. You are truly magical. Even though I don't believe in magic if there was you have it. I know things.
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Robertina B.
Date: 2/24/2018 11:13:00 PM
Thank you so very much!! I am delighted that you enjoyed my poem.. Makes me feel great!!
Date: 2/23/2018 6:24:00 PM
Beautiful. That LIGHT is always with you, even when you think it is not. Lovely Poem Robertina. x
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Robertina B.
Date: 2/24/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thank you so much !! Happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 2/22/2018 10:51:00 PM
What a lovely poem, Robertina. It is wonderful.
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