empathy

I think of all these people, who will land in the emergency room
That night,
I think of all those who think of suicide as we open
A door,
I think of very old dogs walking around knowing 
that they will die,
I think of the poets who are alone and doubt their poetry,
I think of people who have friends only on a screen
of television,
I think of all those who depend on health care,
To the old men lying on their beds in the Saint Thomas residence,
I think of all those who will learn a death in the day,
To the artists who want to flee their country,
To the orphans who seek parents who no longer exist,
I think of all the lovers abandoned, who live only with a ghost,
To the young people who seek violence so as not to doubt,
I understand their despair, and say to them:
“ Feel free to share your misfortune”
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Hind Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 6:03 PM
So kind- I enjoyed your views
Rolland Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 12:15 AM
thanks Paige for stopping by an d commenting have a nice sunday with poetry
Nicole Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Yann, you have such a wonderful heart. You are so kind, caring and compassionate. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Thank you for always thinking of others. Your thoughts touch my heart so deeply. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
Rolland Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 12:14 AM
deeply thanking you Nicole may be i am the son of my mother, blessings yann
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 5:52 AM
Some deep thoughts you are having. So many of older people have to go through such hard times before death comes. Your work brought about a whisper of Thanksgiving to my lips because I am so blessed in so many ways. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 11:07 AM
thanks a lot Sara, your comment is so touching, "hard times" is so the right word, blessings
Buehler Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 9:37 PM
This poem is very touching and profound. You are very caring and thoughtful, and if there were more like you, the world would be a better place. I enjoyed your poem. It was so nicely written. :)
Rolland Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 3:38 AM
thanks evelyn, for the supportive comment, if only we could act together, some do, i only note, poet job, i guess, enjoyed your touching comment best wishes
One Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Your poem thoughtfully explores the theme of human suffering, isolation, and the deep, often unspoken struggles faced by many people in society. It captures a wide range of emotional experiences, from the physical and mental pain of those in emergency rooms or contemplating suicide, to the quiet loneliness of poets doubting their work, and the alienation of people connecting only through screens. The poem’s simple, yet profound structure highlights how suffering can be universal, but also deeply personal.
Rolland Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 3:36 PM
thnaks So, for the very thoughtful comment, suffering is personal, and every on bear a cross, sometimes we need to be selfish too, cross is too heavy for one person, it is so unversal as you said, thanks for posting enjoy your week end
Rose  Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 7:29 PM
Oh Yann, I can feel your empathetic heart here, well done
Rolland Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 3:33 PM
thank you so much Rose, for the kind comment blessings
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 1:09 PM
Wow what a deep and moving depiction of all the people suffering as those of us a little more fortunate prepare for the holiday. May God bless them and help us to know if people nearby us who need our help.
Rolland Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 3:39 PM
thanks andrea, i wrote about situations that i lived or close people i know or knew, there are always tough moments to endure best wishes to you and family
Empress Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Dear yann, this poem I felt so deeply, sometimes i think of all that too and sometimes i grasp the energy of all those suffering and it can also make me really sad and down, so being an empath is not easy, and having empathy, yes can be difficult but we need it too more, in this very cold world! What a beautiful heart you have! So kind! Stay blessed! Sending you light always
Rolland Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 3:36 PM
thanks IE for your empathic soul, this is the most beautiful sentiment on earth, and why we are living for best wishes
Buhagiar Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 1:45 AM
Brilliant ending to a poem that asks so many questions. I only fear Maltese hospitals. I'd rather die than end there.
Rolland Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 3:34 PM
thanks victor, sorry for making you think of hospitals, i scare about hospitals too, you do the right thing best wishes
George Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 7:32 AM
One endowed with empathy alone will be able to think of his unfortunate brethren. Others don't care a hoot about others as long as they are comfortable and their needs are met. Dear Yaan, always keep a compassionate heart as you have now.
Rolland Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:20 PM
thanks valsa, man is bon selfish, and listen so rarely God, enjoyed your brilliant comment have a nice day
Rawlings Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Such an excellent poem describing the turmoil the world has been in since COVID and our continued demise afterwards leading to the Amahgandon.
Rolland Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:19 PM
thanks Christina, for the supportive comment, yes there is some turmoil in the minds thank you a lot
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 1:52 AM
- Many of us can probably feel a sense of hopelessness - Empathy is an important building block of morality - Every day we hear about war and terrorist attacks in many places around the world - It is good to share your thoughts with others, and to put them into words - Life is difficult for many and we are entering a time where love should be high on the list - hugs
Rolland Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:17 PM
thank you anne lise for the very brilliant comment, as you say, love should be on the list thanks a lot
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Your lists are always interesting. As we grow older, and some in their youth, know many in these situations. “that night” “a door” “the poets who are alone” …love the final two lines…you understand and invite them to share. I pray with people at church on Sundays. We see a sea of faces and can have no idea what they are facing. Blessings ~ Kim
Rolland Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 11:20 PM
o thank you so much Kim, for the understanding comment, your words are so precious here and full of empathy and warmness, i felt a poignant reading, thanks
Anaya Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 4:55 PM
This is so much empathy, Yann. For so many in need. Thank you for sharing and caring as much as you do. I especially like " I understand their despair, and say to them: “ Feel free to share your misfortune” xhugs~Anaya
Rolland Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 11:21 PM
thank you anaya, your words warmed my heart, empathy is a necessity in the world to go forward, have a nice day
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