Emma's Wonderland

My child has a love of poetry
It is rare, for she is only nine.
In her bare mind, words are potpourri
floating, rhyming by stanza, by line.

Holding a book ever so tightly
(it relieves the raw ache in her chest),
my sweet Emma floats almost nightly
carried by puffins in a bird nest.

She paints her pictures lying in bed
dreaming up puffin activities.
Writing what's in the front of her head,
one of her common proclivities.

Her situation stems from asthma
of pet hair and seasonal rebirth.
She fancies ease from the miasma,
high above noxious coughing on earth.

Starting with nursery rhymes at three
we have read Silverstein and Dahl
both of us memorize easily.
Her choice today is Lewis Carroll.

My Emma lives in her Wonderland
especially with a nebulizer.
Her teachers all seem to understand
it's “down to earth” math that defies her.

August 23, 2021

Sponsor	Regina McIntosh
Contest Name	The One Who Touches My Heart
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September 14, 2021 at 8:06 AM
May you daughter remain in wonderland always and may all her wishes and dreams come true. My best wishes for Emma, her health, her painting and writing. Love the poem, congratulations on your win in Regina’s contest… Belle
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September 14, 2021 at 8:37 AM
thank you, Belle, actually it is my grandson, Jase, who fights asthma (partially b/c of mold in his school). His summers and vacations are better. Wearing masks for COVID has really helped him with asthma. Thanks for your concern, fiction based on fact.
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:54 AM
A beautiful write on child Emma. Congratulations!
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September 14, 2021 at 8:38 AM
thank you, Christuraj. I always appreciate your commendations.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:41 AM
I love this! Beautifully done and such a beautiful soul. God bless you with love, Gina CONGRATS TOO!!!
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September 14, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Thank you, Regina. May God bless you too as He has blessed our entire family through my grandson's asthma. Strangely enough, it has brought out the best in him. Appreciate the placement in your contest very much - thanks.
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