Emily's Birthday Tea Party

The old folks at the home, and none at all
of them too fleet of foot in their last years,
came shuffling, some with walkers, down the hall,
including those with aids pressed in their ears.

Then one (whose punctured lung had not healed well)
was wheeled in; she had just turned ninety-three!
They'd all come (when the nurse had rung the bell),
for what was now to be revealed: a "Tea!"

The English lady wheeled in never knew
what they were planning as she lay in bed.
They'd stamped the name of "Emily" onto
The sparkling crown which now lay on her head.

With cake crumbs on her chin, in pure delight,
She sipped the tea they'd sweetened up just right!


April 28, 2010
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Watt Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 9:07 AM
This is a delightful and heartwarming tale of an English gentlewoman celebrating her birthday with a surprise tea. How happy this must have made her!
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Andrea, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
Grammatico Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Nicely done, Andrea. A touching account, and such a smooth read. And I love your rhymes.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Andrea!
Gentry Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Andrea! Wonderful :)
Turner Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your placement in the contest. I wish I could live to 93. I think.
Negron Flores Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:22 PM
loved your humour in this write - made me think of the folks at mum's care home! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Wonderful write Andrea..Congrats on your win
Haight Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Precious Sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
Gorelick Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:31 PM
A sweet story..congrats dear. BG
Nehls Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 5:07 PM
This is a very sweet sonnet, Andrea. I have entertained at old folks homes before and I could picture every line. Very good use of the sonnets restrictions. I enjoyed it... Robert.
Davis Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Andrea what a cute and charming write. Full of sweetness and humor. One lump or two in your tea. LOL Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my One More Try poem.
Poet Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Yes Love it !This tea party of elderly women--kash
Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 10:57 PM
Very sweet image of this elderly woman, Andrea. My father was 93 when he died last year, but thankfully he hadn't suffered the pain of a punctured lung. I have a soft spot for seniors. Love, Carolyn
Fooksss Aka Lynette C. Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 10:12 PM
DIS IS CUTE. N UR REALLY 54, DANG U LOOK YOUNG. bUfFy
Delacroix Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Very cute and warm little tail of this caregiving tea party, Andrea. Very inspiring. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Neat write that was great in rhyme and rhythm...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Austin Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 3:05 PM
Hard to tell what fantasies go through the young mind these days. Romance doesn't seem to be something mystic. Too much reality I suppose. Does the "Smoke get in their eyes?" Love, Dave
Murphy Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 1:43 PM
very nice always a plasure to read your poetry well done have a great day faleshia
Chachere Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 12:33 PM
thats really sweet Andrea.this would be like my great grandparents.she is quite old, and a queen she is(: i'd help create a party that looks like their time, and so they can feel young again. -Always&Forever Lynette
Tapley Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 12:27 PM
Fabulous Sonnet! Really beautiful. I could just see the lady with the cake crumbs on her chin and sipping her tea. This was a joy to read.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 8:38 AM
Such a poignant view into old age and their environment as well.. a beautiful Sonnet from the "Queen" herself.. a few seconds to say "hi"..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Richards Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 8:03 AM
A charming poem, you have sweetened my morning coffee just as they sweetened her tea....!! Loved this, Andrea!
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