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Embracing the Sky

Embracing the sky Here I stand in a lonely field of winter rye and dandelion watching faint ribbons of apricot break across a weary horizon And as I see the enchanting beauty of the morning sun embracing the sky, my heart wishes I were that sun and you were that sky Good morning Soupers

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Lin Lane

Date: 12/7/2018 9:30:00 AM

Melancholia still holds your reins. It saddens me and yet offers such beauty in its hold.

Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Lin. It shows, huh? I appreciate all of the kindness you show to me and always look forward to your wonderful words about my work.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/7/2018 7:55:00 AM

Beautiful sentiments, love this line: "faint ribbons of apricot ".

Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2018 9:07:00 AM

Thank you M.L. I am happy you enjoyed this. Good morning

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/7/2018 7:39:00 AM

This is beautiful and reminds me of the sky I saw this morning. So nice ! :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2018 9:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi. I'll bet it was beautiful. Good morning

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/7/2018 7:21:00 AM

there is no greater beauty than the morning sunrise. sadly not here, too much rain today. Good morning to you although its afternoon here now in a wet uk. Tom.

Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2018 9:06:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Happy afternoon. :)