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Savoring the dawn on the grassy meadow Your smile would reverberate in the sky A fantastic life as the sun comes after shadow I loved the shivering breeze in your eye And after death, let it follow deep below. Written: January 08, 2023 Bite Size Contest No59 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/9/2023 10:45:00 PM

A beauty of a poem! It's A fave for me. Good luck in the contest. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/9/2023 5:24:00 AM

A blend of nature and human emotions--lovely poem my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/9/2023 2:05:00 AM

Delightful poem. Much appreciated.

Valsa George

Date: 1/8/2023 8:36:00 PM

"the shivering breeze in your eye"... Love this expression. A beautiful small poem, proclaiming aloud the beauty of love.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/8/2023 7:15:00 PM

Most anything bite size in food leaves me wanting more. Same as i felt after reading this with your intriguing “I” and “you” being vast as Sky yet defined then down to Eyes. Bite Size with feast sized surprise, im off to read it several more times! Hugs, sally