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Embrace of Quietus

EMBRACE OF QUIETUS
Your story begins with a prime promise On plateau of life you’d blaze a furrow In dawn sky like the golden sun you’d rise Meteor across night draped sky you’d glow. Surging storms strike, snatch glitzy gleam away Suck you in pained whirlpool of agony Drown you in fathomless tears of dismay Life becomes sad debris of irony. Longing for cool embrace of quietus From dust you try to rise, turn into ash You introspect in times of hiatus Listen to rhapsody of life afresh. Soul sated you will live life of beauty Flow on bliss to painless eternity.
Written : March 15, 2018 January 30, 2020 Contest : Strand Choice 10, Any Form, Any Theme Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 11/22/2018 3:51:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Subimal. Well done.
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Date: 4/20/2018 5:27:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/21/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thank you s much, Line
Date: 4/20/2018 10:52:00 AM
A beautiful rhyming sonnet. Flows well and rhymes are perfect. Congratulations on your win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/21/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 4/10/2018 10:32:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Subimal. Lovely poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/11/2018 12:36:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 4/3/2018 3:30:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely sonnet . . .
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/9/2018 12:25:00 AM
Thank you, BW for placing the poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/9/2018 12:25:00 AM
Thank you, BW for placing the poem.

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