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Elgy - for my wife

In the realm of grief, my heart lies, Bound to my wife, love's eternal ties. Her memory, a sweet melody, Echoes within, through the years, softly. Her life was a testament, pure and fair, To the goodness and oneness we shared. She embodied love, kindness, and grace, Her spirit shone bright, lighting every place. She found joy in life's simplest treasures, In smiles, warm embraces, and shared pleasures. Her compassion, a gentle, soothing balm, Brought mutual understanding, a healing calm. I carry her love, her laughter, her cheer, A source of comfort, ever so clear. Her wisdom, a beacon, shining bright, Guides me through darkness, into the light. Why do we wait for death's embrace, To see the goodness, to offer grace? Let us appreciate, while they breathe, Kindness bestowed, their hearts will keep.

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Date: 8/7/2024 1:45:00 PM
Jay, congratulations on your win in my contest with your elegy poem, well done, Constance
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Date: 7/26/2024 6:28:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful ,touching and very sad poem Jay….l am so sorry you lost your precious wife Jay….life isn’t fair! Sending you cuddles my friend! Debx
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Date: 7/23/2024 7:02:00 PM
"Why do we wait for death's embrace, To see the goodness, to offer grace? Let us appreciate, while they breathe, Kindness bestowed, their hearts will keep" - A teaching is given through the elegy to the spouse. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2024 10:04:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again.  Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Date: 7/16/2024 4:18:00 PM
A precious tribute to a very good woman.
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Date: 7/16/2024 8:37:00 AM
Dear Jay, you have brought tears to my eyes for the love of a wife that has fulfilled your life. My wife and I have been married for 42 years, and she is my heart and my soul. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/15/2024 9:13:00 PM
What a lovely and sweet poem of deep affection and sense of loss. Reading this, I didn't feel any pain, but a calm comfort. The last stanza is a gem. We shouldn't wait for death to show that we loved some, but show our affection while they are alive.
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Date: 7/15/2024 2:49:00 PM
Love is eternal. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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Date: 7/15/2024 2:22:00 PM
I agree, we need to tell them when they are still here, that we love them and treasure them. I enjoyed this poem with a grateful heart that you appreciated her then and now. She is probably smiling from heaven as we speak !
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Date: 7/15/2024 11:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. What a great ending. Sounds like you were richly blessed. "Good Luck"  Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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