Elephant Years

That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she was two.
Mine has panache, wears couture, eats ganache;
That one is missing a shoe.

That's not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she was three.
Mine eats spaghetti, macaroni, vermicelli;
That one just eats PB*.

That's not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she was five.
Mine jumps around, climbs up trees, won't come down;
That one is barely alive.

That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she was ten.
Mine wears his hat, and his gloves, fancy that;
That one has lost his again.

That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she was sixteen.
Mine does his math, goes on dates, takes a bath;
That one can be kind of mean.

That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she turned twenty-three.
Mine knows the bill of rights, when to give, when to fight;
That one will never be free.

That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she turned twenty-nine.
Mine has her own baby, is grown up, but just maybe
That one will turn out just fine.

That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she turned thirty-four.
Mine won't be a waiter, teaches smart second graders;
That one is merely a bore.

That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella,
I said when she turned forty-nine.
Mine is so quick, runs the mile in 20.6;
That one is soon left behind.

There is my elephant, Miss Ella,
Sitting under the palmetto tree.
See the white one, the bright one,
With a sign saying ‘Yes, it is me!’



[*peanut butter]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Henderson Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 9:47 AM
just wanted you to know that I see your unusual rhyme scheme here. It looks a lot like something I do. Looking for variation. Good poem. It worked well for you. Charles
Kuri Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Yeah! I remember -PB&J ! Like this best (next to mine - I have to be loyal, it was hard to write that one!) I have grown children...don't know whether to laugh or cry! Very 'natural/comfortable' read!
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 3:31 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in the "That's Not My Elephant" contest by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 1:16 PM
I'm so glad the elephant won the judge's heart too, Deb. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 1:13 PM
Congrats Deb on your terrific win in Matt's elephant theme contest..my friend.. way to go .. enjoy your top spot ..with luv..
Locksley Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 12:56 PM
This is such a cute poem Deb. Congratulations!
Fraser Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Deb, I'm over the moon for you with your win in Matt's contest. You have taken to the Soup like a duck to water....:)
Duffin Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:01 AM
Hi Deb. Congratulations on your fantastic success. Well deserved. Eamon
Poet Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:12 AM
Congratulations Deb on your big win in the contest!Enjoyed your wonderful poem----kashinath
Walsh Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Really marvellous and clever! Liz
Gorelick Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 4:57 PM
Such a creative write!..it going to do well I m sure..very cool. BG
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 3:39 PM
How interesting this one is. UNique and very fun to read. I bet it does really well in the contest. LUv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Kool entry into the contest Deb, it had me captivated all the way through. Good luck in the contest >> James :)
Roberts Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 2:37 PM
adorable, this was such a fun contest wasn't it
Devonshire Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 2:33 PM
A delightful entry for the contest, Deb. Your bright white elephant won my heart. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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