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Elephant Years

That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she was two. Mine has panache, wears couture, eats ganache; That one is missing a shoe. That's not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she was three. Mine eats spaghetti, macaroni, vermicelli; That one just eats PB*. That's not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she was five. Mine jumps around, climbs up trees, won't come down; That one is barely alive. That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she was ten. Mine wears his hat, and his gloves, fancy that; That one has lost his again. That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she was sixteen. Mine does his math, goes on dates, takes a bath; That one can be kind of mean. That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she turned twenty-three. Mine knows the bill of rights, when to give, when to fight; That one will never be free. That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she turned twenty-nine. Mine has her own baby, is grown up, but just maybe That one will turn out just fine. That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she turned thirty-four. Mine won't be a waiter, teaches smart second graders; That one is merely a bore. That’s not my elephant, Miss Ella, I said when she turned forty-nine. Mine is so quick, runs the mile in 20.6; That one is soon left behind. There is my elephant, Miss Ella, Sitting under the palmetto tree. See the white one, the bright one, With a sign saying ‘Yes, it is me!’ [*peanut butter]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/23/2011 9:47:00 AM
just wanted you to know that I see your unusual rhyme scheme here. It looks a lot like something I do. Looking for variation. Good poem. It worked well for you. Charles
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Date: 1/21/2011 7:01:00 AM
Yeah! I remember -PB&J ! Like this best (next to mine - I have to be loyal, it was hard to write that one!) I have grown children...don't know whether to laugh or cry! Very 'natural/comfortable' read!
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in the "That's Not My Elephant" contest by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 1:16:00 PM
I'm so glad the elephant won the judge's heart too, Deb. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your terrific win in Matt's elephant theme contest..my friend.. way to go .. enjoy your top spot ..with luv..
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Date: 1/20/2011 12:56:00 PM
This is such a cute poem Deb. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/20/2011 12:34:00 PM
Deb, I'm over the moon for you with your win in Matt's contest. You have taken to the Soup like a duck to water....:)
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:01:00 AM
Hi Deb. Congratulations on your fantastic success. Well deserved. Eamon
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your big win in the contest!Enjoyed your wonderful poem----kashinath
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Date: 12/19/2010 5:37:00 AM
Really marvellous and clever! Liz
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Date: 12/18/2010 4:57:00 PM
Such a creative write!..it going to do well I m sure..very cool. BG
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Date: 12/18/2010 3:39:00 PM
How interesting this one is. UNique and very fun to read. I bet it does really well in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/18/2010 3:36:00 PM
Kool entry into the contest Deb, it had me captivated all the way through. Good luck in the contest >> James :)
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Date: 12/18/2010 2:37:00 PM
adorable, this was such a fun contest wasn't it
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Date: 12/18/2010 2:33:00 PM
A delightful entry for the contest, Deb. Your bright white elephant won my heart. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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