Electric Blue Butterfly

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pink purple bursts of orgasmic star-spun pleasure. . . butterfly tingles Written Feb. 23, 2016 Inspired by the Monoku #8 Contest of PD and the word my husband said when I showed him the picture and asked him what he saw in it!

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/14/2016 2:55:00 AM

Really cool reading this again, Andrea. The only entry I know of that took this unique route. Great wording.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/13/2016 11:01:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Congratulations on the placement in your contest. This Monoku does burst with life. The words fill my mind with rainbows of colour. This Monoku is deserving of a seven....MIKE.

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/13/2016 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrea...very well deserving...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus

Date: 3/13/2016 5:18:00 AM

Are you going to keep us guessing, or you know how our mind works, Andrea! Yes, I could have seen this butterfly flying higher...:) Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 3/12/2016 9:13:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win beautiful write. Hugs dear friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2016 8:43:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/5/2016 8:23:00 PM

Did he say orgasmic. Just saying. A Fav!

Mike Bayles

Date: 2/25/2016 12:05:00 PM

I just love this poem, how passionate. Mike Bayles

Jennifer Walker

Date: 2/25/2016 7:57:00 AM

What a way with words sis. This is so good. Imagery, imagery, imagery.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/24/2016 11:52:00 PM

Excellent, Andrea! You took this poem where no one else has taken it ... "orgasmic star-stun pleasure" ... what a killer phrase. I hope this ranks high with the way it excites and the feeling you put into it ... now my stomach is all butterflies.