Eerie

‘ere he goes shaking hands nobody’s there…nobody’s there ‘ere he goes pumping air ‘owever, if’n it is the right season it’d be better to look a bit closer to err in this…to best believe ‘ere he goes a-ghosting 9/30/2022

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Coy Bothwell

Date: 10/6/2022 6:01:00 AM

that is eerie...thx 4 the poem...eerie eerie

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/2/2022 7:28:00 PM

Love this one, Kim! Is it about Biden? He’s def lost his marbles, ha! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2022 5:17:00 AM

could be…I don’t know if he’s lost his marbles, but in his condition he shouldn’t have been the one that they pushed into office.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/1/2022 8:18:00 PM

To 'ere' is human. To 'go-ghosting' is ________ (Fill in the blank). Happy Halloween, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2022 3:34:00 PM

lol! Funny thing is I don’t celebrate Halloween but I did as a child so…

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/1/2022 3:29:00 PM

Spooky. Sounds like our president a little, when going to shake hands.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/1/2022 8:19:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha! Do you mean Mr. 'Hi. I'm Joe Biden, Senator from Pennsylvania. This is Ms. Harris, President of the United States.' Happy Halloween...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2022 3:47:00 PM

Right?!