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I swore I wouldn't tell you not a chance that I would write I put away all those pictures keeping them way out of sight Moon's silver glow was dancing mysteriously upon my bed slowly twisting and twirling along with thoughts of you inside my head A burst of glory awakened me at the break of dawn's new light calling out to the bluebirds that everything was going to be alright I swore I wouldn't tell you even if something was going wrong but I knew you were humming along to every note of her sweet song The sugar maples were changing from dark olive to blushed burnt red and I pictured you pleasantly smiling with a soft lace camisole covering your pretty head Off through the woods I wandered as did the burden of an empty mind hoping I would discover answers to the many questions that I'd find I walked aimlessly in amazement through an Edenous place that I adored alone just me and Mother nature enchanting me with her lore Oh how I wish you were there beside me making all my dreams come true strolling slowly towards the horizon this man and beautiful you

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Date: 12/12/2016 7:51:00 PM
Picture me Tim I am pleasantly smiling
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Date: 12/12/2016 4:30:00 PM
You mean this beautiful man and her.
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Date: 12/12/2016 4:30:00 PM
I love this, Tim. So romantic and yet sad. I wish she were there with you too. Carole
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Date: 12/10/2016 10:10:00 AM
Never stop dreaming for sometimes those dreams do come true. Have a great weekend. love phyl
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:45:00 AM
- A beautiful picture in your words, Tim - Never stop dreaming ... wishes can come true ... - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:43:00 PM
With an offer like that, who could refuse:) I'm not sure how I'd look in a camisole.
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Date: 12/9/2016 7:57:00 PM
I can just see that moon gleam coming through my window, Tim, and mother nature tops it all so beautiful as you know I love nature... Beautiful and romantic Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/9/2016 6:34:00 PM
This is really trully beautiful, Tim! I loved it :)
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Date: 12/9/2016 6:23:00 PM
I love your way of combining nature with the human. So beautiful!
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Date: 12/9/2016 6:02:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Tim. This will melt the ladies hearts for sure.
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Date: 12/9/2016 5:56:00 PM
Being such a nature lover too I adored this poem full of beauty and love! And the ending was magnificent! This man and beautiful you!
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