Eddy's Itty Bitty Kitty

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Eddy lives in the gullibility and cohesibility of a gritty city
Between assimilability civility reality and triviality 

Here Eddy’s senility is merely an eligible technicality    
A wink of eccentricity fragility debility futility impossibility risibility

Still under that mighty illusion of invincibility virility and viability
Invisibility’s equivalent to gentility favouring stability and incredulity   

Eyes void of deceptibility infallibility predictability divisibility
Eddy is still irresistibly witty with intelligibility bordering geniality 

The indelibility of his ability versus disability for agility and flexibility 
Gives Eddy eligibility admissibility accessibility feasibility visibility and divisibility  

Implicit credibility whimsicality spirituality frivolity and squeezability 
Eddy believes there’s no margin for self-pity when you own a pretty itty bitty kitty


Submitted on March 25, 2018 to contest ALLITERATION POEM sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 2ND

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2018 9:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Line, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 9:52:00 PM

Thank you, Eve, for much appreciated visit and comment.

Elaine George

Date: 4/3/2018 7:45:00 AM

I agree with Judith. Many congrats on your fine win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:53:00 AM

Thanks, Elaine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Judith S

Date: 4/2/2018 7:56:00 PM

How very cleverly written. I love this witty ditty Line :) Congratulations on your win!!! Best, Judy

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:38:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. Very appreciated.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/1/2018 8:01:00 PM

Wouldn't want to read it aloud for an audience, although it was kind of fun here at home alone. Unique and unquestionably top rate work. Your placement honor well-deserved, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/1/2018 10:31:00 PM

Thank you, Reason. Those tongue twisters make a great party game though! Can't take ourselves too seriously.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2018 3:22:00 PM

- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/1/2018 5:04:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Silent One

Date: 4/1/2018 2:55:00 PM

I really loved this one Line, great use of assonance and consonance, just a shame it did not have more alliteration, as it would have been in top place.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/1/2018 5:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for This fun contest and your compliment. Most appreciated, SO.