Echo

Her neighbors claim her as their fairy,
And gather around to protect
This little wood nymph of their forest
Who so needs their love and respect.

They don't know how she came to their woodland.
It seems she is one of a kind.
She must gaze at reflection in water
For one like her own self to find. 

Lovely flowers bow in abeyance
All the wood creatures kneel down with awe.
The wind tries to clear the lake waters,
That she might see the picture they saw.

The magnificence of her surroundings
More than easily rivaled by
The beauty of her reflection
As it’s framed by the bright blue sky.

She has no access to glass mirrors,
This little nymph of the wood.
She longs to see her own features
Without ripples if only she could.

Goddess Hera is extremely jealous
Of her beauty, her goodness, her youth.
Though there is no reason for vengeance,
Goddess ire doesn’t listen to truth.

She puts a vile charm on the wood nymph
And steals away her sweet voice.
She can only speak now as an echo.
This dear child has no other choice.

The wood creatures gather around her.
They miss her melodious song.
They give her the new name of Echo,
Declaring what happened was wrong.

One day at the lake was Narcissus.
She was charmed but could not tell him so.
When he asks if she deems him as handsome,
She repeats his own words as an echo.

He’s amazed at her impudent actions,
Intrigued into saying “I love you.”
Love releases her from the wicked one’s spell.
“Beloved  Narcissus, I love you too.”

They spend all their hours now together,
Gazing at the pretty pictures they make,
More gorgeous than lilies reflected
In clear waters of their wedding lake.

By: Joyce Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Arnone Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:29 PM
I liked your echo-fairy, Joyce. Congrats!
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July 18, 2014 at 2:44 PM
Nice win..>PD
Arnone Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:31 PM
34 Wins, to be exact (including Ruben). ;-)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Bravo! A splendid tale. Congratulations.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 1:35 AM
A glamorous fantastic fable poem. Congrats on yor top win, 1st place. And warm regards n tnx.
Nance Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Well done, this a wonderful story! Grats on your win
Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 4:37 AM
sweetly scribed, joyce.. I like!...sweet congrats!.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 1:04 AM
Beauty echos beauty my dear friend Joyce! Such a lovely write,, I loved it,,Congrats on top win// Upma//
Rivenbark Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Love it :D Congratulations on your win
Jerden Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 7:08 PM
Great rendition of a classic Greek myth, Joyce. Congratulations!
Lawless Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 12:14 PM
It seems the echo of beauty's reflection was beauty itself. Great job Joyce.
Eastman Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 11:07 AM
I truly loved this light hearted poem. It was a masterpiece. Thank you for entering my contest.
Haick Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Joyce. Always, a joy to read. : ) Love, Annalise
Fraser Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest my friend.. so great to be sharing the winners list with a great friend like u ...luv..
Freeman Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Great job Joyce, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's second place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 12:17 AM
Hurrah for your big win, Joyce. It just had to be!
Maverick Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:34 PM
wonderfull result here Joyce, all the best to you with the win congrats.
Gorelick Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 9:09 PM
This contest brought forth some gorgeous poetry..congrats to you and your clever use of Echo.. beautiful. BG
Mannan Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 7:55 PM
beautiful mixture of myth and realism. Many congratulations for this big win.
Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:16 PM
what a spellbinding piece, joyce! smashing congrats to you! :) hugggs, nette
Poet Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Wonderful interpretation of the contest photo!Congrats Joyce on your 2nd place win!---kashinath
Richards Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 5:45 PM
Just lovely is this poem!! I am honored to share this placement with you, Joyce! Congratulations on your win! love, Carrie
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