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The sky's motion and the imagination. Echo—elation. I heard the echo and heeded my own voice Echo—rejoice. Into a gray, flawless sky as the earth sits still Echo—drill. A mellow echo of the music's dying beat Echo—neat. Dying screams would echo all night long Echo—along. Until even death couldn't stop them Echo—ahem.  War and quake echoes fade with tears Echo—fears. Sounds transform the swords Echo—words. And what reality delighted the heart Echo—art. Hear the rain, recalling the rainstick Echo—stick. In its motions, you can just hear a hush Echo—rush. Still, amid it all, the echo of your words Echo—swords. There was always a rumble in the house Echo—spouse. It's a laugh, but the response has grown Echo—shown. Because of this, I'm becoming older Echo—bolder. When she left, she took the joy with her Echo—where? Narcissus stares into lakes, easing time Echo—sublime. frosty mirrors reflect flowers falling thin Echo—within. Echo wails sadly through canyons, weak Echo—unique. Light-loving eyes don't echo into the past Echo—cast. Venus is enigmatically linked to Vesper. Echo—whisper. Echoes may bestow hope, yet I obey. Echo—sway. The sea breeze should bend the willow. Echo—billow. Music blooms in the songs we all sing. Echo—spring. When I hear the echo of my own thoughts. Echo—rots. There is no one else here except myself. Echo—shelf. A kiss will not do as much harm as a gun Echo—fun. However, its echoes anticipate further Echo—together.
3rd place contest winner Written: February 11, 2023 Writing Challenge - E Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France ECHO VERSE: Echo verse has a pretty simple rule: Repeat the end syllable(s) of each line. No other rules.

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Date: 2/21/2023 9:57:00 AM
Sotto, interesting poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, I like the image too, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:00:00 PM
Lovely Echo poetry Sotto, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative/write. Love This One. I have never done an Echo write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 2/15/2023 10:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 2/14/2023 8:18:00 PM
This is quite an ingenious creation. These forms of poetry are strange to me. Congratulations dear Lasaad on your win.
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Date: 2/12/2023 9:32:00 AM
- "Echo verse" ... is it a poem form? - Original and excellent writing, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2023 10:53:00 AM
... interesting
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Sotto Poet
Date: 2/12/2023 9:41:00 AM
Yes, Anne, it's a poetry form called echo. Echo verse has a pretty simple rule: Repeat the end syllable(s) of each line. Thanks for dropping by.
Date: 2/12/2023 5:51:00 AM
I can feel the energy and exuberance throughout my friend. Your echoes resonate. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/12/2023 2:40:00 AM
One cannot but admire the way you composed this poem on echo. Best for a win.
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