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Ebony Silence

in the shadows of the depth of woe's existence, i was awakened by thoughts of disregard- never ceasing to reason without intellect I seek darkness, the gloom that greys the ivory glazed moon in r e d e m p t i o n i fear not the obscurity- but lather myself in dim swarthiness of loss and regret; drowning in a bath of coal never born to be a precious diamond wreckage is the epitome of what my youth saw- I wore burn holes to cover up the wounds; scars fade in time but pain doesn't for I am but a resounding aria of temperamental mania, encompassed by a turbulent existence of lapses in judgement concealed for the last time i realize i am a perpetual woman of intense solitude ebony silence has seized my soul and i am forever bound to a life devoid of hues that bring elation o, how I crave alleviation crying out to angels who said they would save my soul *********************************** 12.11.19

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Date: 12/27/2019 5:06:00 PM
Amazing piece of work here, --too bad for the 30 line limitation--wanted more, my compliments on your first place win ~ Aloha always William
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Date: 12/26/2019 6:45:00 PM
This is just brilliant, Laura:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:15:00 PM
Wow Laura an amazing win!;)
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Date: 12/26/2019 3:42:00 PM
You knew I loved this one, smart of you Laura, and you were rewarded with a top win, loved every word!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/26/2019 5:15:00 PM
I just saw your previous comment below from 12-11, I am so sorry! I would have said thank you if I saw it. But, I thought you would enjoy this. Thank you for top win, I am honored and always enjoy your contests. Many thanks and be blessed x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/15/2019 2:50:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery though a sad poem, Lu Loo. Congrats in the contest and a merry Christmas to you. I hope the season is a merry one for you.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/26/2019 5:14:00 PM
sorry for late response! Thank you sweet Andrea, you also...x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/12/2019 7:54:00 AM
.."ebony silence has seized my soul...." That line gave me goosebumps to go with the tingling of uplifted hairs at each reading....wonderfully poignant write
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/26/2019 5:13:00 PM
sorry for delayed response... thank you dear John for that nice comment- I loved reading that today, have a great holiday season x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/11/2019 3:26:00 PM
Another WOW!! You outdo yourself every time you pick up your pen. Hard to believe but I think you are writing your best ever!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/26/2019 5:12:00 PM
I apologize John, I didn't see your previous comment until today. I would have responded with a thank you :) I thought you would enjoy it...thank you so much x:-)-luloo

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