Ebony and Phonics

Ebony and Phonics


Talkin’ Jive, slippin’ inta the ethnic eccentricities
of survival, hip-hop, rap, the blues, Ebonics.

Ebonics, the melding of Ebony and Phonics
into a language that could be spoken
within hearing of the overseer.  Genius
spoken here, clandestine communication
lines strung in plain view.  News flashes,
who ran, who escaped, who was sent and
where, who was sold.  Assumed “ignorance”
displaying pure brilliance before an unconscious
audience.

Ebonics, a language shaped by hardships and
prejudice, now reduced to phrases and a
chant-like mockery of its necessity and
protection. 

Ebonics, a language that preserved a spirit,
nurtured a fierce independence, fed the
flames of rage and the hopes of love.

Ebonics, a tribute to a tenacious desire to
be free, not from the chains, but from
the bondage of the chains.  Free to
communicate their deepest thoughts,
their hidden loves, their seething hates.

Ebonics, lost key to railroads underground,
doors no longer found, generations in
search of freedom’s sound.


John G. Lawless
8/16/2014
for Verlena S. Walker
Ebonics – Let’s do Some Slang contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mister Roboto Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:57 PM
I dig reading these Ebonics takes. Yours was very different and had some historical lessons and opinions, Strange how the only line I didn't agree with stuck out the most. This is not a bad thing, for if we all agreed on everything, how robotically boring would that be? Keep on bringin' the WORD!
Mehta Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:16 PM
I enjoyed the informative tale with a message, Congrats, John
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 7:42 PM
So true, man should never forget the cost of cheap labor - people around the globe have made it a practice to enslave each other and it is NEVER right or justified, economics nor power is a justification for behaving "less than human!" BUT the mind can never be truly controlled it will always find a way to be FREE! Congrads Light & Love
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:09 PM
Debbie, always good to hear(or read) you insightful responses. Thanks for the kind words.
Chutani Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 6:06 PM
a wonderful tribute to the spirit of Ebonics reflecting the travails of common people in search of freedom. congrats for top win. Mohan
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Thanks Mohan for stopping by and commenting.
Nance Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 5:53 PM
Wonderful, I like the story behind ebonics, it really is an art, and you have told of it so well. This is definatly a first place piece well done!
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Casarah, I have multi racial children and grand children so it was necessary to learn and share their history and culture with them from both sides. Not an easy thing to do in these times.
Johnson Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 3:17 PM
this is wonderful and informative. well worthy of top spot. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:10 PM
Joyce, thanks for visiting and commenting. I haven't had time to read all the poems that placed in the contest.
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 12:58 PM
very clever write many congrats on your top spot:-) Hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Good to hear from you Jan, I've been falling a little behind with my comments and responses
Mcintosh Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Beautiful. I just love it. A huge congratulations with Lots of hugs, Gina
Sietesantos Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Excellent write for a well-deserved TOP win! Please accept my congratulations, John!
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 9:58 PM
congratulations accepted and appreciated, Pandita. Thanks you for checking in.
Walker  Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Well done John. I love the edification you brought. You show me that you could slang and then you improved upon the knowledge of what Ebonics is all about. Again, congratulations on your first place win. /s/Verlena S. Walker
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Verlena, this was a fantastic "Prompt" or "Theme" for a poem. It took considerable reflection on my part to allow the spirit of the theme to find an appropriate expression. Thank you for such a challenge.
O'Leary Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Excellent!!!
Lawless Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 12:04 PM
Terry, thanks for reading and commenting.
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