Early Spring Winds

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Image result for pictures of early spring fruit trees in bloom The pear trees are in full bloom but I think they will be okay even though there is cold out there this morning and I think there was some frost but I could not tell for sure.

Knock, knocking Primordial being Chimes rocking Limb's mocking Pines sighing, cold frost flying Spring's second docking Macabre Blooms and fruit of spring Peach cobbler Gone you brute Wind from the north and west stream No pear preserves dreams

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Valsa George

Date: 3/30/2022 7:26:00 AM

Beautifully chiming and rhyming, Sara ! The alliteration gives a musical effect ! Really enjoyed !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/30/2022 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review of my work. It was fun writing that one even though that north wind was playing havoc on our fruit and berry crops. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/25/2022 1:08:00 PM

I love early Spring when fruit trees come into bloom - there is nothing more beautiful, they look like brides with their lace and frills. Excellent write, hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/26/2022 4:59:00 AM

Jennifer, a very apt description of pear trees and apple trees in bloom. Your visit was very encouraging. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/21/2022 10:43:00 PM

Nature has a way Sarah, like your poetry, of being steadfast and true.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/26/2022 4:56:00 AM

Thank you, Harry. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2022 6:46:00 AM

I really like this form and it is one I did as a prompt on Instagram... You did it really well and I like your use of words..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/25/2022 12:46:00 PM

SO, Why, thank you for the nice review of my work. Good that you are challenging people to try different forms. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/21/2022 6:20:00 AM

Following the winter season, we begin to notice the first signs of spring blooming in our backyard. Dear Friend, your poem is both inspiring and reassuring in its spirit. Blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/25/2022 12:45:00 PM

Sotto, Thank you for your nice review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here. I always need blessings. Sara