Early Morning Race

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Tentative sunlight Playing with turning wheelspokes Fast hands spur on rims Early morning race with dog Joyful barks mix with laughter *** February 1, 2017

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John Herlihy

Date: 2/2/2017 2:17:00 AM

Those Tankas, they really do back a punch. Pow. Like drops of rain in the desert (where I live). JH

Darren White
Date: 2/2/2017 2:47:00 AM

They do. When they work it feels so good.

Phillip Garcia

Date: 2/1/2017 9:17:00 PM

Further evidence that the world would be a better place without cats. No joyful barks come from those rodents. Great piece!

Darren White
Date: 2/2/2017 12:18:00 AM

Thanks! How'd you like my happy day so far?

Chris Green

Date: 2/1/2017 6:14:00 AM

This was fun Darren and felt happy and free. Nice one my friend.

Darren White
Date: 2/1/2017 6:32:00 AM

Thank you :) It felt good to write this, carefree.

White Wolf

Date: 2/1/2017 5:12:00 AM

That's the spirit, Duir! An awesome tanka mate!

Darren White
Date: 2/1/2017 5:17:00 AM

Thanks Budgie :)