Early Morning

Smoke slowly rises off the still charred embers from the moonlit campfire from the night before. The grass glimmers in the morning dew chilling my shoeless feet as I walk to the banks of the shimmering stream hoping to catch us a couple salmon on their way to spawn I sit on a big rock and cast my line across the way I spy a hummingbird fluttering peacefully from flower to flower Croaks from frogs echo in the air as they try to stay cool from the now rising sun splashing it's heated rays down upon us I haul in a couple of keepers and head back to camp toss another log on the fire string up the fish to smoke crawl back quietly into the cozy tent and cuddle up close to her.
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Chircop Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 4:16 PM
So special this is. Salmon is my favouritr fish so I have to love this poem. So very romantic with a cosy feeling at the end.A definite favourite.
Pinet Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:21 AM
This is a well written, imaginative, descriptive, and creative, all rolled up into one beautiful poem. Emile.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 7:18 AM
I love the feel of this piece!
Baumgarn Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 5:34 AM
Wonderful atmosphere and nostalgiac feel to this one, Tim. I enjoyed it a bunch!
Vaso Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 11:09 PM
When you say "her" you didn't mean one of the fish right? LOL kidding, great write, loved how you mixed nature/camping and romance!
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Ahh!!! Enjoyed reading your work..Very expressive and descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
A  Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Your poems are always amazing Tim, I love everything about nature, especially the echoes croaking through the air. That's a nice way to end the day, cuddling with the one you love after a nice reeled in dinner... SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 2:43 PM
a beautiful description of the outdoors, ending on a very cuddly note!!
Andresen Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 2:08 PM
- Make Life Easy ..... then it becomes beautiful, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Wow! A real fantastic morning it is my dear friend, Tim. I love and thoroughly enjoyed reading this superb poem of yours. Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hug, Leonora
Eastman Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Ummm... Have you seen those salmon on their way to spawn... They are BIG Mothers! Honest! We once fed a whole house party from only one! Trust me... You won't need more than one! And in the streams you can just walk out there and pick them up... But they look mean... I've seen them move from small puddle to small puddle to get to their spawning place... Honest! LOL... Just saying... But loved the poem. Always do... Especially since you always find a romantic moment!
Trifiatis Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 4:47 AM
That's the life worth living for! Excellent dear, Tim, reminds me when camping in Canada and had an encounter with a... neighbor of the wild. Enjoy my friend!
Laurie Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 3:03 AM
Crikey Tim... I think you're living in paradise. Thank you - Lindsay
La France Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Tim, you have painted a lovely picture with words, a visual 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
Delaney Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 5:07 PM
sounds idyllic, Tim: Life is good, SuZ
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:27 PM
lovely imagery Tim - how romantic:-) hugs Jan xx7
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