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Each Passing Cloud

Each passing cloud is something new. Look, my dear child, up at the sky. Creatures you’ll see up in the blue - like fluffy birds, but they don’t fly! Wait! They are not white birds at all. Each passing cloud is something new. They might be big; they might be small. I see a rabbit. Do you too? You see a cat! Does it say mew? I see a dog and now a giraffe. Each passing cloud is something new. You see a goat? That makes me laugh. Now you see bears? Bears in the air! You sure are seeing more than I do. I see instead some cows up there. Each passing cloud is something new. March 6, 2023 for JCB's Each Passing Cloud Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/19/2023 6:27:00 AM
Dropping back ewith Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 3/18/2023 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun/cute write. Have a blessed day/weekend.........................
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Date: 3/11/2023 5:29:00 PM
Very nice poem, Andrea, It's so nice to reflect on days we look to the clouds and to our imaginations.
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Date: 3/8/2023 8:56:00 PM
Cute and lovely, Andrea:)
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Date: 3/8/2023 8:27:00 AM
Cute poem, Andrea. I've seen 'em, too! - John
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Date: 3/7/2023 7:31:00 PM
You have done a clever job Andrea ! Clouds keep shapeshifting and renewing . This poem will delight both the grown ups and children. All the Best
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Date: 3/7/2023 6:23:00 PM
Clouds shape the creatures as they sail by, Very nicely penned Andra, hugs
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Date: 3/7/2023 12:22:00 PM
Perfect Andrea! Five star rating. Your heart Sparkles in this one. Fav! Pangie xx
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Date: 3/7/2023 8:53:00 AM
Andrea, a lovely poem for the contest, I love it, blessings, Constance PS, I sent you a soupmail today.
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Date: 3/7/2023 7:00:00 AM
I like the tenor of your poem. Love this form. Interesting imagery, Andrea-- from each passing cloud.
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Date: 3/7/2023 5:48:00 AM
You old cloud watcher you:) I wrote one but did not enter into contest. he gave me an NA last time. I did not want another one:) Fun read Andrea. Have a great day:)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/7/2023 12:19:00 PM
Daniel..you write well, Try another poets contest. I don’t like competing with fellow poets. Was in 4 contests in 4 years,))) Andreas poem is quite good, I think.. Four years as a poet , hardly qualifies me to run against people with decades more experience. My opinion, only Pangie xo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/7/2023 6:33:00 AM
I know the feeling. But usually JCB is pretty fair.
Date: 3/7/2023 1:39:00 AM
- Let your imagination run wild in the sky ... lovely, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/7/2023 12:52:00 AM
Cute poem. Clouds do have a formation occasionally. Hugs.
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