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Each Passing Cloud

Each passing grey cloud Has the potential To seemingly capture me within it's Shadow I have the potential To move out Of the shadows Whenever I please Neither me Nor the cloud Appear conscious Of the power we hold Each Passing Cloud Poetry Contest 3rd March 2023 Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Hat Bueckert

Date: 3/20/2023 12:16:00 PM

Much said in few words, a good view on things I think if people can take that first step out. Inspiring words :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/20/2023 12:25:00 PM

Thanks Hat! Too poetically skinny for the contest on this occasion though :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/18/2023 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/18/2023 10:40:00 AM

Thank you Paula, much appreciated

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/9/2023 2:26:00 PM

Hello Dilly Dally, so nice to meet you. I like to watch the clouds. The shapes of clouds change slowly to another. I see animals, mountains, Castles. and other shapes. it is interesting to watch the clouds change shapes.. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/9/2023 2:36:00 PM

Hello Dilly Dally yes clouds are mesmerising. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/9/2023 2:28:00 PM

Thank you, they are mesmerising, good evening to you too

Valsa George

Date: 3/4/2023 9:47:00 PM

"I have the potential to move out of the shadows"..... ! No doubt about it. A cloud has the power to cast its shadow. But if we have the power to move out of it, why fear? A very crisp and concise poem full of meaning..... dear friend.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/4/2023 11:30:00 PM

Thank you Valsa

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/4/2023 12:51:00 AM

Enjoyed. God bless you. Love, Gina

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/4/2023 12:53:00 AM

Thanks Gina